Black/White, Good/Evil, as though there are not some of both in all hearts. Only one perfect and he is still in control. Sounds almost like a Nostradameos poem, shrouded in a mystery but still very clear in it's meaning. I think more are watching than imagined.
Mysterious, yet revealing. Hold out to the end for His promise! This is a deep, enlightening poem, Pat, for players whose eyes remain open.
I'll save this one to read again when I need encouragement.
You have gotten to the heart of the matter in a very clever way! I love the way you have woven this offering, like a skilled tapestry weaver. Look between the lines for the real solution. Very good!
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Keep alert a profound stirring of the stakes.
Well done.
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Jane
I'll save this one to read again when I need encouragement.
Connie
You have gotten to the heart of the matter in a very clever way! I love the way you have woven this offering, like a skilled tapestry weaver. Look between the lines for the real solution. Very good!
Joy L. Hale
your poem was on target for this day of all days. brought life into focus. thanks for sharing.
carolyn duncan