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better luck next time #2
by Steve Patterson → (All Poetry by Steve Patterson)
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better luck next time
in tryin' ta' find
Love's rythmn and rhyme
after all
Love is so sublime
so don't take the fall
just better luck next time

better luck next time
in findin' True Love
just bide your time
'till you find
that One you been dreamin' of
after all Love ain't always so kind
so better luck next time

better luck next time
in findin' Love's rythmn
in findin' Love's rhyme
just remember
Love's out there
from January to December
it's only a ? of Where
so better luck next time

better luck next time
don't try to be cute
don't be a mime
don't be mute
just keep sayin'
and prayin'
maybe next time
Love will be playin'
it's true tune
better luck next time
when there's a Full Moon

just bide your time
Love is sublime
like a margarita with salt & lime
better luck next time
im matchin' the rythmn with the rhyme

better luck next time
that's all i can say
after all
we stand & we fall
we all play
the same game
but if you don't buy a ticket
you'll never win
wou'll never know when
what then...

so better luck
next time
after all Love ain't just a f**k
but i would suggest
be my best guess
Love ain't just up to Luck


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 Reviews of "better luck next time #2"
Reviewed by Cynth'ya Reed
Reviewed on June 10, 2004
Love the way the word play is done. Is this a rap?
blessin's,
cynth'ya lewis reed


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