my last poem... (poem) by Steve Patterson on AuthorsDen

my last poem...
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this is my last Poem
to you about you about love 'cause you are all of the above this is my last time my last rhyme i've gone blind i can not See i can not Hear i can not Touch Unfortunately i still be who i be i still be me and i Still love you red hair green eyes thick thighs nice round ass your touch your kiss i do miss your feel your scent your smell with words i could tell all of this things and your memory still does brings it's own story but, i just write for The Last Time a Poem my LastRhyme was The First Time The Only Time I have Loved so, fittin' it be my last poem is U & me my last poem My last write? Right? Wrong. YOU are my forEver Song even tho you be gone and i Be Alone Alone withOut You Is still Love from The First Time ta' The Last Time YOU were my Rhyme YOU were my last poem my ONLY Poem YOU still are and forEver You will be my last Rhyme my last Love my Last Poem �

Reviewed by Kay P Devenish

Reviewed on April 6, 2005

Awwweee,Steve,you outdid yourself this time,this one is your best,this is top notch beautiful poetry,a love poem of the highest standard,indeed it is.
Just beautiful.
Best wishes to you and yours
from
your aussie fan
Kay.

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on April 5, 2005

Thats right Steve, forget her, there are many more fish in the Gulf...;) Ed

Reviewed by Michelle Mills

This reads like a song Steve...have you thought about having a tune put to it? It's great! Michelle

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

i certainly hope this is NOT your last poem, steve! i love how you write! well done!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :(

Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)

Wow this is very profound Steve.

Reviewed by Sue Hess

wow steve, i'm jealous...this sounds serious