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down on the ground
by Steve Patterson → (All Poetry by Steve Patterson)
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whish more a' these words were mine
thanks ray

i hear the mailbox
do it' thing
i hear a goodbye ring
in it's slots
i care nots

i saw the moonlight
i knew it was goodnight
i felt the sunlight
thru my window
but i didn't know

let the machine answer the phone
i got nuttin' ta' say
ta' anyone i know
i ain't wantin' ta' be found
i'm down on the ground

a sound echoes
yes i knows
the hello's
and Goodbye
and i cry
i sigh

same old sound
a'blues
same old
do's what i do's
too many true s
for all the lies
too many blues
for all my tries

i hear the sound
a' bein' on the ground

nuttin' profound
in what i found

lost love
heartache
all a ' the above

let the machine answer the phone
i'm all alone

let the mail go in the slot
i care not

i just be found
down on the ground

nuthin' profound
to be found

with me
nuthin' ta' see
but me
down on the ground

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 Reviews of "down on the ground"
Reviewed by M. B. (Reader)
Reviewed on July 19, 2005
Down
on the ground

I was found
by the bee

that be
following me
to see
where I be

the bee
stung my butt
sticking up
like a nut

on the ground
where I was
found
by the bee

and me
be
happy

not on the ground
anymore
to be found
by the bee
that follows
me

Smile, Love, Life's too short.
~Mari


Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on July 16, 2005
As we get older, we think of what it will be like down IN the ground, don't we...? Ed

Reviewed by Alexandre Arnau
Reviewed on July 16, 2005
yup, thanks ray.

i just hope ray thanks you, too.

alex

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM
Reviewed on July 16, 2005
Sighs....


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