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Shadow & I
by Steve Patterson → (All Poetry by Steve Patterson)
  
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Walkin' the streets
my Shadow & i,
one foot in front a' the other.
all i could do was sigh
and wish i loved another.

time passes by.
still i wonder "WHY?".
why i still cry.

my shadow say ta' me,
"can't ya' see?".
"GEE!".
" just let IT be".
"can't ya' just stay here with Me?".

Walkin' the streets
my Shawdow & i,
one foot in front a' the other.
little fucker sounds like
my mother.

oh what Strangled webs we weave
when first we practice to Believe.

somehow this seems appropriate for this poem. least ta' me and maybe one other. guess ya' had ta' be there.

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 Reviews of "Shadow & I"
Reviewed by me2
Reviewed on May 12, 2002
least you arent hiding in the shadows

good write...definately

Reviewed by Samantha Hendricks (Reader)
Reviewed on May 8, 2002
Sounds like my mom too! Don't ya just hate that. Liked this one quite a bit.

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray
Reviewed on May 7, 2002
Hmmm, shadow? this sounds so sad, great expression Steve~

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on May 7, 2002
liked the twist also...;-) good write

Reviewed by Gregory Sonn (Reader)
Reviewed on May 7, 2002
A good twist on when first we practice to deceive.I have my shadow ask me questions at times myself. Great stuff. Gregg

Reviewed by Jenni Kalicharan
Reviewed on May 7, 2002
LMAO!!!
Sorry...couldn't help that..... enjoyed this.
Jenni


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