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Get Offa' My Cloud!!!
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Hey You--- Get Offa' My Cloud!!! for cryin' out loud!! you know i put the silver line trhu IT. i painted IT pink. wadya' think you could just step in and make IT sink? Hey You--- Get Offa' My Cloud!!! i washed away the gray. i held IT so IT wouldn't float away. and wadid' you say "oh well come what may". i remember that day. now ya' come back wantin' ta' play. Hey You--- Get Offa' My Cloud!!! IT"s mine. and we're doin' fine without you. our skys are blue, you know what you can do!! just Get Offa' My Cloud. for cryin' out loud.

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Reviews of "Get Offa' My Cloud!!!"

Reviewed by June Thompson (Reader)

Reviewed on February 3, 2003

"The Thunder Rolls"... did you read it.

I enjoyed this write of course *grin

Reviewed by Trixie Love

Reviewed on June 2, 2002

Fantastic write Steve..

Reviewed by Lori Moore

Reviewed on June 2, 2002

Good write. Is Mick and Keith up there too?

Reviewed by Denise Manuel (Reader)

Reviewed on June 1, 2002

lol..isnt there room for us? good write..

Reviewed by Linda Hill

Reviewed on June 1, 2002

This one made me smile....thanks steve!

Reviewed by Aamie Burnley

Reviewed on June 1, 2002

... so nice to find grins up in the clouds. :)

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK

Reviewed on June 1, 2002

6-02-02

When It Disperse's Make sure You Have a Parachute On!

TRASK

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on June 1, 2002

HA-HA-HA-HAH!!!!! Steve, you are really getting creative these days!!!!!

Heeeheee!....I'm really getting a good chuckle out of this one!!!!!!

Great write, my friend!!!!! *Still laughing*

Sandie Angel :o) / May Lu $*_*$

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