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Can't Give Credit
by Steve Patterson → (All Poetry by Steve Patterson)
  
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can't give credit
'cause i don't know
where credits due.

a song on the radio.
a line.
words there
'cross the FM lines.

"just one love shines for me tonight.

look at all them stars up in the sky.

just one shines for me tonight."

wish i knew who sang it.
wish i knew who wrote it.

wish i knew my star.
the one that shines so bright.

not that it matters.

just one star shines for me tonight.

wish i knew.

oh well.

least there was a star
shined for me tonight.

it did shine bright.

wish there was you.

wish i could give credit.
credit where credit due.

credit to you.

"star light...star bright"

wish there was you.




(wish in one hand & spit in the other...see which one gets wet first)

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 Reviews of "Can't Give Credit"
Reviewed by krissy
Reviewed on July 4, 2002
wistful and a little sad. written well, though. hope you're okay.
hugs
irish

Reviewed by Tiana (Reader)
Reviewed on July 3, 2002
Loved the write, Steve! Loved the footnote! lol

Reviewed by Lori Moore
Reviewed on July 3, 2002
This turned out great Steve.


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