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waitin' on good-bye
by Steve Patterson → (All Poetry by Steve Patterson)
  
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oh shit.
the fan's been hit.
dodged the bullet.
but the lights been lit.

just waitin'
on the good-bye.

waitin' on the why.
the reason.

waitin' on the sea at
the end of the season.

waitin' on good-bye.

waitin' on the words.
the word.
good-bye.

waitin' on the feel.
the feelin.

waitin' on the deal

waitin' on the feelin'
that's felt.

waitin on good-bye.

waitin' on the raw,
the whelp.

waitin' on EMS.
waitin' on help.

waitin on the cards
been dealt.

waitin' on good-bye.

waitin' on the blister.
after the burn.

waitin' on my sister
so i can learn.

waitin' on the song
that's been sung.

waitin' on the hang man
after i'm hung.

waitin' on the 'bong"
after the dinger.

waitin' on the ring
after the ringer.

waitin' on the sun
after it's set.

waitin' on the got cha'
after ya' get.

waitin' on the loss
after the bet.

waitin' on the gone
after you get.

waitin' on the good
after "bye".

waitn' on
the good-bye.

waitin'
and i don't know why.


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 Reviews of "waitin' on good-bye"
Reviewed by G. Michael Patterson (Reader)
Reviewed on July 18, 2002
Just stopped by to see what you're doing these days, and got my socks knocked off. You're gettin' better and better, brother. Keep doin' it. Love ya, Mike

Reviewed by Gone Gone (Reader)
Reviewed on July 4, 2002
Great poem Steve.

Reviewed by Lori Moore
Reviewed on July 4, 2002
Hey Steve... another good write.

Reviewed by Masarat Daud (Reader)
Reviewed on July 4, 2002
Don't wait for things to come to you or else you'll waste a lifetime. If they're all so important, then swim out to it.

Reviewed by Tiana (Reader)
Reviewed on July 4, 2002
Happy 4th Steve! Liked this write...

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on July 4, 2002
like the play of words in this poem...

Reviewed by krissy
Reviewed on July 4, 2002
now i'm worried!
irish


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