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got dam women
by Steve Patterson → (All Poetry by Steve Patterson)
  
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got dam women
swimmin'
in my ocean
fulla' their emotion
hand lotion
on their feet
ain;t it neat
to repeat
ain't complete
got dam women

my ex
feelin' my reflex
to her Hex-
agram
thank ya' mam
slam bam
but
i ain't Tex

tell me you do
tell me you don't
tell me you will
still
tell me you won't

got dam women
himmen'
& hawin'
"aw shawin'"
pawin'
sprawlin'
ballin'
& cryin'
tryin'
ta' ruin my flyin'
tryin'
ta' save my dyin'

i'm just whyin'
just gettin'
buyin'
sighin'

got dam women
swimmin'
in my ocean

crest of the wave
i gave
i save
me for last
cast
away
from
you
got dam women

i'm just swimmin'


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 Reviews of "got dam women"
Reviewed by m j hollingshead
Reviewed on March 12, 2005
well done

Reviewed by June Thompson (Reader)
Reviewed on February 3, 2003
excellent piece of work.... this and women *grin I remember you mentioned this one. Glad that I got to read it. Look forward to more... I thoroughly enjoyed the views in this one

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on January 22, 2003
excellent play on words...

Reviewed by Micha Julian
Reviewed on January 22, 2003
WHOA....
I love this...I, just...well, sooo uch here, um..oh, just great piece...Thank You!

Reviewed by Sara Coslett
Reviewed on January 22, 2003
Steve.....this is great. Glad to see that all this attention has your attention :D

Reviewed by krissy
Reviewed on January 22, 2003
very true...this one is a masterpiece. but ooh..the emotion behind it.
take care, kiddo
hugs n luv
irish

Reviewed by Janet Caldwell
Reviewed on January 22, 2003
(((((((((((((((STEVE)))))))))))))))

Reviewed by Caldwell Phillips (Reader)
Reviewed on January 22, 2003
Steve, this is the BEST piece that you have ever written, Everyone loves it!!!!!!!!

Jan & Alan xoxoxo


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