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Be My Valentine
by Steve Patterson → (All Poetry by Steve Patterson)
  
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some seem ta' think
i'm a pretty good poet
'least most don't say i stink
i don't know it
i don't always show it
God knows, i often blow it

but, it's that time of year
when we're supposed ta' remember
those to us who are dear
a time for candy & hearts
and all them lovin' parts

and i been sittin' tryin'
ta' write some poetry
sumpin' ta' ryhme
with "Be My Valentine"
try as i might
try as i may
i can't figger out the words ta' say

how do ya' ryhme
" I Love You"
with "Heartbreak"?
or
"Your My Darlin'"
with "Heartache"
and
"For Forever"
doesn't seem ta' fit with
"Never"

where's the poetry
in Reality?

where's the ryhme
in
"Be My Valentine"
and
Good-bye""?

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 Reviews of "Be My Valentine"
Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on February 9, 2003
well done... like the movement of idea in this one...

Reviewed by Aamie Burnley
Reviewed on February 9, 2003
... i like your twisted little valentine :)

Reviewed by Aamie Burnley
Reviewed on February 9, 2003
You are a great poet.

Reviewed by Tien Avielle (Reader)
Reviewed on February 9, 2003
depressing, Steve. One of my favorite authors here writes romance - which is why I rarely read her, lol. Some holiday topics are best ignored, imo. Why should we tear ourselves apart? I think I'll write a nice love story about my DOG. (-:

Reviewed by the phantom pheonix (Reader)
Reviewed on February 9, 2003
very hilarious and yet so touchingly true this was a great poem!!

Reviewed by a- maryllis
Reviewed on February 9, 2003
Wow, Great write Steve!!

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
Reviewed on February 9, 2003
Oh Steve this was so original...love it.Floria

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Reviewed on February 9, 2003
wonderful.


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