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everytime
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everytime
you cross my mind
you step right into my heart
and the heartaches start

everytime
i hear your voice
ya' leave me no choice
the heartbreaks begin
& they never end

everytime
i see your face
i feel that empty space
there in my soul
i touch the hole in my whole
my heart turns cold

everytime
i remember a memory
i just can see
how this could be
no more you & me

everytime
you cross my mind
i lose my rythmn
i lose my rhyme

everytime

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Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on February 23, 2003
your whole poetry page is on my site please contact me and tell me if you have my manage my poetry page on you site
love
tinka

Reviewed by A PAX
Reviewed on February 23, 2003
I have no idea whats going on, but I left my computer one, and came back to it maybe 2 hrs later to finish posting a poem and I am in YOUR WORKS CONTROL PANEL....AND i HAVE LOGGED OFF AND ON AND i AM STILL IN IT!!!! i WANT TO KNOW WHERE MY STUFF WENT...and i want to reassure you that I have not touched any of your works, ok? Are you seeing my things? Please let me know....this has me freaked out....does this happen often here?????

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on February 23, 2003
just so you'll know...whenI go to my "Works Site" to submit or change a poem your site comes up instead even though I use my password. This is an invasion of your privacy and I have no way to get to any of my work. I could change anything there or wipe out everything and tis is a very serious mistake for our creativity and privacy. I wrote the masters tyhat be here but no answer so far. It is Feb,23rd....now you can go after them as well.

Susan K. Rowse

Reviewed by Micha Julian
Reviewed on February 23, 2003
sadly lovely, I..oh, am not good at commenting, but this, very moving and so well written...I loved the last verse... esp.
"i lose my rhythm
i lose my rhyme

everytime"

hurts, this piece, felt and honest as well as the flow of it's verse, thank you..ah, can relate, but you did this so well...
m.


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