for some reason today,
maybe it's the season comin' my way,
i remembered that first day
when i heard your voice.
you left me no choice
but ta' fall in love with you.
what else could i do?
and i remembered
our first dance.
that first chance
to hold you in my arms.
to feel your charms.
the first chance
ta' rest from Life's harms.
then i remembered
our first kiss.
oh what a kiss!!!
that moment when our lips
touched for thr first time.
i remembered the rythmn & the ryhme.
there was nuthin' sublime
about that first time.
i miss your kiss.
i miss our dance.
i miss your voice.
oh, what i wouldn't do
for one more chance.
but, it's not my choice.
it's up to you.
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Reviewed by the phantom pheonix (Reader)
Reviewed on February 12, 2003
this was so excelletnly romantic until those last line again another great punch of surprise and you pulled it off so wonderfully you are a excelent poet great job
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that will not come again.......
her name was .... opps, sorry the poem
brings back memories
good write
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