Oh this is so sad Steve!.....Great write with good emotional display!
Sandie Angel :o)
Reviewed by Oisín Breen (Reader)
Reviewed on February 13, 2003
Its very nice and its sweet but i think somehow you are rhyming forceably. If you feel rhyme let it loose like a jazz musician. If you don't play tight. Keep up the work though your good. :)
Reviewed by the phantom pheonix (Reader)
Reviewed on February 13, 2003
always a great poet you shine with your southern style its a great poem truly
I met Jerome on a busy city street in Baltimore, Maryland, when he was forty-five years old. On that particular day, I was out and about, enjoying a much-needed day off from work.
I wanted to purchase a sukiyaki sub. I parked my car in an area of
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~Sanil
love and peace,
Susan
Sandie Angel :o)