Love cannot Hide
behind a fake facsade.
behind a false front.
Love bears the brunt
of It's Feelings.
each layer pealing
from in to out.
That's What Love's About.
Love has No Pride.
Love comes from Inside.
Love is measured
by How Deep & How Wide.
Love is treasured
by the Ebb of It's Tide.
My Love can not Hide.
My Love is Deep & Wide.
My Love knows only High Tide.
My Love has No Pride.
Love is a chance for pain and a 50-50 chance at bliss. It is worth the step,the chance to find perfection. Great write.
Love and peace,
Susan
Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on February 14, 2003
Sad ending but I enjoyed the poem. Good write.
Reviewed by the phantom pheonix (Reader)
Reviewed on February 14, 2003
that was a cool ending the rest was wonderfully written but the ending caught my attention the most wow that was like a punch right between the eyes(oww i need now to go to the doctors im going to go blind!!!!!)LOL that was so cool
“Being a couple yet free is our next challenge on the evolutionary ladder. This book successfully helps us unravel the myths that block that achievement. It does it with warmth, with readability, and with balance. It recreates everyday problems and
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great piece!
Warm Love,
*-Brittany-*
*Happy Valentine's Day!*
Love and peace,
Susan
Jack
William