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Heavenly Update
by Steve Patterson → (All Poetry by Steve Patterson)
  
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Heavin' can wait
'till i get
an update

now?
do i earn?
or do i re-learn?
is it what i eat?
or what i earn?
or do i re-treat?
how do i wait for my seat?

is it someone i meet?
was i washed?
or 'cause i's sloshed?
what i did?
or didn't do?
what, oH Heaven
can i do?

is it My GOD
or is it your's
who opens & closes
them heavenly doors?

St. Peter
or Paul
or all a' ya'll

before it's too late
how do i rate?
can we consumate
this deal
while i'm still real?
hey, GOD, did i miss the wrong Meal?

did i do right?
did i do wrong?
hell, i write
a' hell of a song.
so where do i belong?
always try ta' get along.

Heavin' can wait
if it ain't too late.
come on GOD
give me
an UPdate.
that is,
if it ain't too late.

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 Reviews of "Heavenly Update"
Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on March 12, 2003
i keep mine on automatic update... very well interfused ideas...

Reviewed by john zimmerman
Reviewed on March 12, 2003
never too late,
let god be god---

this is a fine write--
you ask THE questions

hang in there

john+


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