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sorry
by Steve Patterson → (All Poetry by Steve Patterson)
  
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Sorry i fucked up
i messed up i lost you there in time
there ror a few whiles
i lost my time
i lost my line
i lost my rhythm
and i lost you
that's exactly it i lost you

i love you, still
i always will
thank you Jack
whack
whack
whack

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 Reviews of "sorry"
Reviewed by Zenith Elliott
Reviewed on July 23, 2003
Life is a circle and this too shall pass. There will always be a brighter day ahead. Keep your chin up Steve, your a fighter.

Reviewed on July 23, 2003
Very sad and moving, I felt this one so deeply,

Rein

Reviewed by Sara Coslett
Reviewed on July 23, 2003
hey...is it the memory of the way she smells? the look on her face when she smiles at you? the sex? what is it that you miss the most? that you just cannot ever, ever let go of? what is it that makes her, your her?

Reviewed by Kay P Devenish
Reviewed on July 23, 2003
An excellent poem Steve,don't beat yourself up,you...are cool!

Reviewed by Erica Ivory
Reviewed on July 23, 2003
This hurts.. Harder if you blame yourself in some way.. "If onlys" will kill you. I went through this letting go a year ago.. It's hard but there is life after love.

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
Reviewed on July 23, 2003
How about a change in time and venue, works for me.

Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)
Reviewed on July 23, 2003
Lady Peg is so right Steve! Smile dear because brighter days truly are ahead!
~Nikki~


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