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i ask
by Steve Patterson → (All Poetry by Steve Patterson)
  
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i ask.
you answer
with no answer.

i commit.
you avoid
committment.

i serve.
you volley.

i ping.
you pong.

how long
can this go on?

for a while?
for ever?
for never?

oh well,
i am enjoying
the game.

at least it's
different.
it's definitely
not the same.

i ask.
you...?

Copyright ©2002 steve patterson

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 Reviews of "i ask"
Reviewed by An Angel (Reader)
Reviewed on February 27, 2002
Wonderful. Simple. Loved it!
~~~Angel
Reviewed by Dens Dreamweaver (Reader)
Reviewed on February 26, 2002
Ahh and such is life.. (smile) This is an interesting perspective.
Love and Light
dreamweaver
Reviewed by Gregory Sonn (Reader)
Reviewed on February 26, 2002
Very different approach with this one. I liked its simplicity and truth. Nice write. Gregg
Reviewed by Charles Mann (Reader)
Reviewed on February 26, 2002
really great,Charlie
Reviewed by Michelle Carroll (Reader)
Reviewed on February 26, 2002
Opposites attrack!
Reviewed by Sharon Williamson (Reader)
Reviewed on February 26, 2002
I too enjoyed this one....but I have enjoyed all of the ones I've read so far...lol
Great write.
Sharon;)
Reviewed by Sharon Williamson (Reader)
Reviewed on February 26, 2002
Hi Steve,
I realy enjoyed this. Thank you..

Lady Water Dove *~*~*~*
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a shadow among shadows. <br>that's what <br>my Life seems <br>ta' be. <br>
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