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hole in my heart
by Steve Patterson → (All Poetry by Steve Patterson)
  
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hole in my heart
won't go away.

hole in my heart
feels that way.

hole in my heart
just another day.

hole in my heart
love you still.

hole in my heart
always will.

hole in my heart
time can't fill.

hole in my heart
all i can say.

whole in my heart
not today.

Copyright ©2002 steve patterson

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 Reviews of "hole in my heart"
Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on March 14, 2002
sad but well done...

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
Reviewed on March 13, 2002
3-13-02

It Is Time To Let Go Or It Hole Will be In
Your Brain...

TRASK

Reviewed by Lori Moore
Reviewed on March 13, 2002
At least it's not there today...

Reviewed by Dens Dreamweaver (Reader)
Reviewed on March 13, 2002
Namaste Steve! Take courage my friend. One day the whole in your heart will be there again. UNtil then, take time to allow the grieving of the hole in the heart.
Love and Light
dreamweaver

Reviewed by (Reader)
Reviewed on March 13, 2002
steve, i like this but i'm not sure it is on a more positive note. will read back some more.

Reviewed by Silvia (Reader)
Reviewed on March 13, 2002
Very well done.
Bravo!

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on March 13, 2002
nice twist ,but wish the whole were positive instead of negative...;-)for your sake

Reviewed by Theresa Koch
Reviewed on March 13, 2002
I agree with D.Enise~I like the feel of hope that th whol has become filled at the end~

Reviewed by D. Enise
Reviewed on March 13, 2002
This is wonderful..So sad and at the same time, "there is hope".
It flows so nice.

~Jen

Reviewed by D. Enise
Reviewed on March 13, 2002
very nicely stated...vicki

Reviewed by D. Enise
Reviewed on March 13, 2002
like the way you changed the first line at the end.


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