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Stopping the rhythm of breath
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 Stopping the Rhythm of Breath 

 

I held my breath and counted to twenty - three, 
I wanted to observed what it did to me. 
I started to imagine different things, 
relative to how I was, how I am, and how I will be.
 
There wasn't much of a change when I got to number 9. 
My lips were closed and my cheeks billowed outward, 
but I think that I felt fine . 
 
At 17, things were getting fuzzy and I had no doubt, 
the air that inflated my swollen chest needed to be blown out. 
I then quickly counted to 23, 
what a relief it was to me. 
 
The color in my face returned from red to tan. 
It made me see something I needed to understand. 
When I held my breath I went through some changes. 
I wasn't in life's rhythm as each moment rearranges. 
 
I took myself out of step with what was around me.
I thought; what would it be like if I held my love for life inside 
me? 
Holding back my compassion for all that is living, 
or waiting to help others from their misgivings. 
Keeping a smile 'til another time, 
performing an act of kindness later down the line. 
 
Expressing yourself is as beautiful as it is free. 
When the time is right what a shame it would be 
if we hesitate to interact with all of the life that's around thee, 
 
We chain our hearts and souls from the sharing of our realities, 
like stopping the rhythm of breath and counting to 23.

 

 


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Reviewed on November 5, 2009
I meditate everyday with breathing exercises & use visual focal point & I totally go there in becoming one with the universe
or the elevation from myself...it is utter calm & renewing
Peace, Love & Inspirations
Vickie

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on November 5, 2009
I felt it. I counted to 23 and my cheeks hurt, eyes bulged and every hair on my body begged for release. It was an answer to need and satiation and finality and comfort when I breathed in again.

You have excellent lessons in life. Again, you remind me of that great Shaman....my father.

Thsnk you.
My blessings,
Susan

Reviewed by Eugene Williams
Reviewed on November 4, 2009
again Dan you have expressed a near heart attack with a calming solution

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on November 4, 2009
Interesting piece but I hear more than just the counting, something deeper from within as if searching for answers, profound and beautiful....

Be always safe,
Karen


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