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I asked
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And I Realized
I asked the rabid frigid winter wind to forsake the bidding of its solstice. And I then begged the clouds not to cry their crystal tears onto my cold cold feet. Then I asked them to forgive me. For I realized that I had asked the earth not to breathe, and the heavens to betray their emotions.

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Reviewed by Eileen Granfors

Reviewed on February 25, 2011

Beautiful. Like a prayer in reverse.

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)

Reviewed on February 25, 2011

Oh my..this is awesome sweet Dan just like you .....sighhh..stay safe and well..Hugss,much love too you dear friend...

Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson

Reviewed on February 25, 2011

Wow...this is excellent...I really enjoyed.

Allen

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg

Reviewed on February 24, 2011

way to look at the larger perspective. i like it.

Reviewed by Chip Bergeron

Reviewed on February 24, 2011

You really set this poem up nicely with some unexpecrted images....Very nice...

Chip Bergeron

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on February 24, 2011

Okay, THIS is very good, Dan. You told the moral of the story with two well-constructed verses. You could have done more, made it twice as long, or even longer, but the impact would not have been as dramatic. Nice work.

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