Broken Wing (poem) by Christine Alwin on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse

Reviewed on December 22, 2009

deep wounds scar
lasting longer than the physical cruelty to love
it stirs deep
sending balms tenderness
Love & Blessings
Vickie

Reviewed by Jms Bell

Reviewed on August 29, 2009

HOW STRONG...HOW CLEAR...HOW SAD. WRITTEN WELL AND SO ENJOYED. YOUR 'GIFT' HAS BLESSED ME AGAIN. THANKS FOR SHARING.
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain

Reviewed on December 14, 2008

Christine~!

Beautiful image; and your poem is simply extraordinary!!

LOve & Hugs,

Lance

Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper

Reviewed on August 16, 2008

This is a wistful and deeply emotional write. It says a great deal in just a few words.

Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G

Reviewed on August 7, 2008

This is deep!
Love heals all wounds!
wonderfully written and felt Christine!
As an angel watches and soothes above, from those clouds!
Stay Positive!
Warmest Blessings, LOVE,LIGHT, and Inner Peace, Warrior Purple Passion Lady SHEExooo

WRITE ON! I Love this picture! In flight - deep thought...

Reviewed by John Leko

Reviewed on July 5, 2008

...slapped...finds the touching reality of your words...expressively sad...in words so beautifully written.
very well done Christine...
John

Reviewed by Deborah Munson (Reader)

Reviewed on June 28, 2008

Reminded me of all the children who only just want love even from abusive parents. They still come close and hope everytime that slap will be replaced with a hug. Well Done! Deborah

Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)

Reviewed on June 23, 2008

Well done Christine, love Holly

Reviewed by Elizabeth Price

Reviewed on June 22, 2008

Such sorrow. Liz

Reviewed by Myrtle Poor (Reader)

Reviewed on June 22, 2008

WOW! Short and sad, but says much. Good job Christine.

Stay Blessed.

Love,
Myrtle

Reviewed by Mary Patterson

Reviewed on June 21, 2008

Much is said in a few words in this sad poem..Well done Christene!.......M

Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed on June 21, 2008

Wise expression in "Broken Wing" prods imagination and inspires the learning heart.

In damiration,

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on June 20, 2008

A sad write
Well Penned
Love & peace

William

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo

Reviewed on June 20, 2008

Oh how simply heartbreaking, yet gracefully said....

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone

Reviewed on June 20, 2008

Oh my, Christine, this is so poignantly sad but beautiful. I love the way you leave the reader with so much to think about! Very well done!
Much peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on June 20, 2008

a slap reality with written with beauty!

ET

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on June 20, 2008

Lot said in those short words. A painful write.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on June 20, 2008

Quite sad, Christine, as are all broken wings.

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson

Reviewed on June 20, 2008

Beautifully written sadness, Christine.

Reviewed by Louisa Dobbins

Reviewed on June 20, 2008

BiPolar

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on June 20, 2008

Christine,

Hope this isn't your reality - sad one to read this morning!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Rose Rideout

Reviewed on June 20, 2008

A sad write you share with us Christine as we face the truth about life, it can be happy/sad/good or bad but we learn to cope with it in our own way. Thank you for sharing.

Newfie hugs, Rose

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on June 20, 2008

Sweet and Sour / Hot and Cold / This 'n That / Zinger of a sad tribute to life and its cold hard facts . . .

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on June 20, 2008

Oh Christine, this one is absolutely lovely,I could feel the sadness of the analogy and reread it several times absorbing the bittersweet sadness of the words. Perfect...
hugs
Fee

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on June 20, 2008

Tears.

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart

Reviewed on June 20, 2008

Deeply affecting Christine, can feel the slap emotionally.