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Upon a Star
by Christine Alwin → (All Poetry by Christine Alwin)
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Upon a Star


Sea of stars sweep sky,
asleep beneath blanket of fog,
she dreams, dreams of him

 


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 Reviews of "Upon a Star"
Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on August 30, 2009
A sailors dream
Beautifully composed
Love & peace

William

Reviewed by Goddess Love (Reader)
Reviewed on August 29, 2009
A heavenly write.

Reviewed by Richard Orey
Reviewed on August 24, 2009
Oh, what a day this is! First, I learn a new trick in the reading of
your poem, "Dance of Flame," and now I think I'm learning to think "out of the box" by surmising that if there's a mermaid and she's thinking of "him," then there must be a merman.

But, no,I didn't get there first. "Merman" is listed in my dictionary right below "mermaid." So, though I learn another new trick, I'm still in my old rigid box trudging along as an "also ran."

Innovative and original! Love it.

Richard

Reviewed by Mary Patterson
Reviewed on August 21, 2009
Oh to dream the impossible dream and have it come true! Great poem...M

Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
Reviewed on August 11, 2009
Beautiful imagery, magic...I felt like I was floating as I read your poem. Lovely.

Anna

Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on August 11, 2009
Christine, this is marvelous work -- romantic and such creative expression my friend -- a haiku with tenderness -- peace and love --Jon Michael

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on August 9, 2009
How thouroughly lovely, Christine. Thank you for sharing this beautiful dream. Love and best wishes to you,

Regis

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on August 8, 2009
hopefully dreams that will shine brightly through the fog ...

lovely poem, Christine ...

Reviewed by John Domino
Reviewed on August 8, 2009
Sweet dreams in poetic fashion. Bravo!

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on August 7, 2009
Nice, very nice senryu, Christine. You take what is inside you and sends it into the hearts and minds of your adoring fans. Lovely.

Reviewed by neerja gandhi (Reader)
Reviewed on August 7, 2009
ahhh...sooo very sweet.. Best wishes . Neerja

Reviewed by Gene Williamson
Reviewed on August 6, 2009
Christine, perfect wedding of visual and haiku.
Dream on. -gene.

Reviewed on August 6, 2009
Christine.... "Upon a Star" is sweet, tender, & endearing to moments of lovers-even in dreaming....
Peace, Love & Inspirations
Vickie

Reviewed by Michelle Mead
Reviewed on August 5, 2009
Ahhh, this makes me dream- I would love to be a mermaid :)

Reviewed by ~ H (Reader)
Reviewed on August 5, 2009
Hi Christine, I see that
we were having the same
dream last night. ha...
good dreams there were,
love the poem & pic.

Love Holly

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on August 5, 2009
Christine,
First the photo so perfect and beautiful. Your poem, so tenderly soft and passionate. I want a dream lover too! Wonderfully written.
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on August 5, 2009
Christine, you are very photogenic in your sleep...

Georg


Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on August 5, 2009
Lovely, Christine; both poem and pic.

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on August 4, 2009
Heavenly romantic, Christine.

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on August 4, 2009
Beautiful, m'lady.

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on August 4, 2009
Christine,
Tender, touching and just lovely.

John

Reviewed by Dale Clark
Reviewed on August 4, 2009
beautiful! oh, to dream

Reviewed by Emile Tubiana
Reviewed on August 4, 2009
Dear Christine, I like this line "asleep beneath blanket of fog" as we all are asleep beneath a blanket of fog. And rare are those who see the stars. Verty nice and sweet. Love Emile

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on August 4, 2009
lovely and soft

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on August 4, 2009
... the night light in her eyes! :)) Sweet dreams indeed, Christine! xx

Reviewed by Cindy Tuttle
Reviewed on August 4, 2009
Beautiful words and picture Christine. Makes me want to day dream.

With Love,
Cindy

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on August 4, 2009
Her long lost sailor

Reviewed by Carole Mathys
Reviewed on August 4, 2009
Just lovely...

Carole~

Reviewed by Lori Moore
Reviewed on August 4, 2009
Very pretty.

Reviewed on August 4, 2009
Beautiful in image and verse; exquisite!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Jms Bell
Reviewed on August 4, 2009
LOVELY...IMAGERY IS VERY GOOD. THANKS FOR SHARING AND BLESSINGS.
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on August 4, 2009
Although you may not post often Chrissie,when you do the wait is well worth it, this one captures the imagination and with the imgaination the heart. It is like a soft voice whispering in the night and the graphic of the mermaid is a perfect match up for this one.
hugs
fee


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