I will Treasure this and these Feelings! Christine - So SWEET! An Innocent Childhood thought! I felt a "PROMISE" HERE! What an endearing Ku!
I hope 2010 is Blessing you! And YOURS!
Blessings of Peace and Harmony,SOULFUL_PurplePassionsSHEEoxxo
Haiku and photo complement one another most effectively, Christine. I love this. I have a poem posted here at AD entitled "Childish Thoughts." Coincidentally, it is exactly on the same theme and also in haiku form. The petals in my case are cherry blossoms falling like snowflakes upon my kids. Thank you. Love and best wishes,
Christine, you laid the essential emotion right at my feet, beautifully arrayed -- a ku finely crafted my friend -- peace and love to you -- Jon Michal
Clever 5 7 5 Ku.
And you never, never never got up to your muddle in this wee puddle.
But no fear, see who at the sea to see who can see the other drenched with sea, see, at the sea shore and see for more sea to sea to sea see.
I do find it weird that in the UK we are landlocked at 70 miles from the sea, max. Yet to many Americans that distance is close to the sea. I'm miles away, nearly 20 miles from the motion of the ocean. Thus i go only a few times a year.
You had better believe it was heaven. I can still remember (yes, I can) the thrill of just jumping from puddle to puddle after a good hard rain. small pleasure for a small boy made for some huge memories. Gotta love it.
Your poem epitomizes the saying "Little Girls are Heaven Sent!"
I love everything about this poem..You say so much in so little. A job well done again!!!!
Knowing your love of children (of all ages)this Ku is so very special. It captures the innocent sweet joy of being a child...almost angelic. Wonderful ku indeed Christine but I never have any doubt when your name comes up as posted that it will be worth reading.
hugs
fee
A further collection of poems, many from years in the Middle East, but also the California San Francisco and Central Coast areas (Santa Cruz, Carmel, Big Sur, Berkeley, etc.).
I hope 2010 is Blessing you! And YOURS!
Blessings of Peace and Harmony,SOULFUL_PurplePassionsSHEEoxxo
Regis
Anna
capture the stunning coloring
of your photo
tenderly kissing every word
Love & Petals
Vickie
And you never, never never got up to your muddle in this wee puddle.
But no fear, see who at the sea to see who can see the other drenched with sea, see, at the sea shore and see for more sea to sea to sea see.
I do find it weird that in the UK we are landlocked at 70 miles from the sea, max. Yet to many Americans that distance is close to the sea. I'm miles away, nearly 20 miles from the motion of the ocean. Thus i go only a few times a year.
Keep splashing.
Short and Sweet.
You are just so good at capturing a mood and the essence of a moment, and here you do it splendidly.
John
ps - sorry i'm late coming to this, haven't been able to gain access to AD...it's gone all glitchy
jf
Georg
I love everything about this poem..You say so much in so little. A job well done again!!!!
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"
George
hugs
fee
Be always safe,
Karen
Thank you.
With Love,
Cindy
Love it!
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~
And a priceless picture
Thank you for sharing
Love & Peace be with you
William