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Puddle
by Christine Alwin → (All Poetry by Christine Alwin)
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Puddle

Blossoms rained petals,
fragrant puddle 'neath my feet,
a splash of heaven

 

 

 


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 Reviews of "Puddle"
Reviewed on January 19, 2010
I will Treasure this and these Feelings! Christine - So SWEET! An Innocent Childhood thought! I felt a "PROMISE" HERE! What an endearing Ku!
I hope 2010 is Blessing you! And YOURS!
Blessings of Peace and Harmony,SOULFUL_PurplePassionsSHEEoxxo

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on January 14, 2010
Haiku and photo complement one another most effectively, Christine. I love this. I have a poem posted here at AD entitled "Childish Thoughts." Coincidentally, it is exactly on the same theme and also in haiku form. The petals in my case are cherry blossoms falling like snowflakes upon my kids. Thank you. Love and best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed by Jms Bell
Reviewed on January 14, 2010
A LOVELY 'Q'... VIVID IMAGERY AND A GREAT PICTURE. THANKS FOR SHARING... BLESSINGS. LOVE, JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on January 14, 2010
Christine, you laid the essential emotion right at my feet, beautifully arrayed -- a ku finely crafted my friend -- peace and love to you -- Jon Michal

Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
Reviewed on January 14, 2010
Oh Christine the picture is absolutely adorable, and the Ku is amazing! A true gem!!!

Anna

Reviewed on January 13, 2010
your loving words
capture the stunning coloring
of your photo
tenderly kissing every word
Love & Petals
Vickie

Reviewed by Andy Turner
Reviewed on January 13, 2010
Clever 5 7 5 Ku.
And you never, never never got up to your muddle in this wee puddle.
But no fear, see who at the sea to see who can see the other drenched with sea, see, at the sea shore and see for more sea to sea to sea see.

I do find it weird that in the UK we are landlocked at 70 miles from the sea, max. Yet to many Americans that distance is close to the sea. I'm miles away, nearly 20 miles from the motion of the ocean. Thus i go only a few times a year.

Keep splashing.

Reviewed by Douglas Bentley
Reviewed on January 13, 2010
Superb. . . .
Short and Sweet.

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on January 13, 2010
Christine,
You are just so good at capturing a mood and the essence of a moment, and here you do it splendidly.

John

ps - sorry i'm late coming to this, haven't been able to gain access to AD...it's gone all glitchy

jf

Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)
Reviewed on January 13, 2010
Nice Ku. Well done.

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on January 13, 2010
Barefoot feelings!...heavens!

Georg


Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on January 13, 2010
You had better believe it was heaven. I can still remember (yes, I can) the thrill of just jumping from puddle to puddle after a good hard rain. small pleasure for a small boy made for some huge memories. Gotta love it.

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on January 13, 2010
Your poem epitomizes the saying "Little Girls are Heaven Sent!"
I love everything about this poem..You say so much in so little. A job well done again!!!!

Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on January 13, 2010
Just like a piece of Heaven, Christine.....and what an adorable photo.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on January 13, 2010
Heavenly!

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on January 13, 2010
You have a wonderful way of expressing yourself with just a few well placed and sweetly written words. Nice job.

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on January 13, 2010
Beautiful KU to go along with two sweet darlings.

George

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on January 13, 2010
Knowing your love of children (of all ages)this Ku is so very special. It captures the innocent sweet joy of being a child...almost angelic. Wonderful ku indeed Christine but I never have any doubt when your name comes up as posted that it will be worth reading.
hugs
fee

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on January 12, 2010
Oh what beautiful little children and how endearing are your words...

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Cindy Tuttle
Reviewed on January 12, 2010
This is such a sweet and wonderful poem Christine.
Thank you.
With Love,
Cindy

Reviewed by Kimmy Van Kooten
Reviewed on January 12, 2010
What lovely thoughts. . . both visually and to mind!
Love it!
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on January 12, 2010
a beautiful write Christine
And a priceless picture
Thank you for sharing
Love & Peace be with you

William

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on January 12, 2010
how very touching both the picture and the poem


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