Time (poem) by Christine Alwin on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on March 21, 2011

The race of emotions outstrips the ability of time to keep pace. Anticipation is a heightened sense when ever hearts yearns. I bid you love and peace my dear friend. Jon Michael

Reviewed by Jms Bell

Reviewed on February 14, 2011

'...LIVING ONLY FOR MY TIME WITH YOU...' A THOUGHT PROVOKER...THIS COULD BE A GOOD THING ...OR...VERY SAD. WELL DONE AND SO ENJOYED. THANKS FOR SHARING, LOVE, BLESSINGS & FAITH...
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by David Clure

Reviewed on February 11, 2011

Romantic imagery; the sense of the flow of time being paused and then played upon the departure then arrival of a loved one...very, very powerfully expressed in a fresh and interesting way in TIME.
loved it Christine.
~Z.B.McClure

Reviewed by Mary Patterson

Reviewed on February 5, 2011

Short and sweet , filled with passion and ...........M

Reviewed by Amor Sabor

Reviewed on February 4, 2011

Fantastic metaphors...it is what I really crave the most in a write. Beautiful work, Christine.
Amor

Reviewed by Axilea MU

Reviewed on February 4, 2011

I always like this kind of atmosphere with the almost theatrical presence of time.

Axilea

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on February 4, 2011

Powerfully succinct, expressive and lovely at the same time; thank you for sharing this gift, Christine. Love and best wishes to you,

Regis

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart

Reviewed on February 4, 2011

BOOM, this one is outstanding, so soft and low keyed until the explosive end. Stunning.

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on February 3, 2011

superb short verse,filled with deep passion,excellent metaphor!

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on February 3, 2011

Delicious, Christine! Beautiful in concept and design. Totally LOVE these lines:

... dance of a dozen or more wicks, perform for time

conjures wonderful images in my mind. Short but oh so sweet. xx

Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse

Reviewed on February 3, 2011

entrancing the intimate moments of romance
sweetly you undress our visions here Christine
and I love the photo too

Love's Sensual Whisper
Vickie

Reviewed by Chessly Nesci

Reviewed on February 2, 2011

When you are in love you forget about time. You are lost in the moment never wanting it to end...Beautiful romantic poem Christine! Love, and hugs!~ Chessly

Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather

Reviewed on February 1, 2011

so intense. anticipation...and that possible moment. awesome! Morgan

Reviewed by neerja gandhi (Reader)

Reviewed on February 1, 2011

sooo very beautifully said...it says a lot. :)

Reviewed by Annabel Sheila

Reviewed on February 1, 2011

Beautiful writing, Christine!

Anna

Reviewed by s g (Reader)

Reviewed on February 1, 2011

Hello Christine, I enjoyed reading your poem. Thank you for your friendship. Susan

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on February 1, 2011

Love the last line, Christine.

Reviewed by Cindy Tuttle

Reviewed on January 31, 2011

Beautiful Christine! Thank you.

With Love,
Cindy

Reviewed by John Flanagan

Reviewed on January 31, 2011

Subtle, deep and rich,
this is of the highest quality,
Christine.
Kudos!

John

Reviewed by Christine Tsen

Reviewed on January 31, 2011

Oh, This is brilliant and full of infinite mystery and passion.
Christine, I hope you and yours are well. So many prayers...
Love,
Christine

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on January 31, 2011

Our hearts do seem to be linked with time when it comes to love...and yes time can seem like an eternity and an eternity can cause the brain to run amok. Then again to have the kind of love that can make time stand still is so very special.
hugs
fee

Reviewed by Michael Guy

Reviewed on January 31, 2011

Evocative and provocative(did I spell that right?) Full of anticipation!

Reviewed by Marcia Miller-Twiford

Reviewed on January 31, 2011

So beauiful Christine. You've captured the true essence of waiting for that special someone. A good poet can write volumes in a few lines and you've achieved that skill. I applaud your talent and wish you were on our website too.

Reviewed by Gene Williamson

Reviewed on January 31, 2011

Christine, what a wonderful poem you've fashioned
in just seven lines, perfectly controlled. I love
this poem. -gene.

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on January 31, 2011

very nice and creatively done

Reviewed by TONY NERONE

Reviewed on January 31, 2011

I find this lovely piece to be erotic in the sense of absolute love.

Peace and Love
TONY

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone

Reviewed on January 31, 2011

Oh my dear Christine, to love so deeply and completely, this is so telling...Lovely simply lovely...

Peace, love and light,
Amber

Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)

Reviewed on January 31, 2011

what a cool poem, mysterious, pagan, haunting, erotic, perfect!! great piece christine.

Reviewed by Douglas Bentley

Reviewed on January 31, 2011

What a poem showing your love & dedication.
Showing what your thoughts & your day revolves around
Superb!!
I just love the way you can say so much with so little.

Doug

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on January 31, 2011

Love's time clock never ceases and its arms are always waiting to caress you.

George

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on January 31, 2011

Heartfelt and deep, Christine. Well written.