A bitter feeling. Expressing it in haiku form makes the sadness even stronger.
Axilea
Reviewed by Glen Manese (Reader)
Reviewed on August 25, 2011
A solitary, and yet still there is a hidden message... emptiness is not all what's perceived... A turtle does live a long journey... Thanks for sharing...
One can feel empty inside. But God simply can NOT create nothing. We must remember this saying: "You may only be one person but to one person you may be the world." Amen
a rainy day mood everyone experiences periodically -- it is the emergence of the invigorated persona from the shell with renewed purpose and joy that is a thing of beauty and joy Christine -- I bid you love and peace my dear friend -- Jon Michael
gazing at raindrops or the stars above, one can certainly feel the fullness of that special emptiness.
powerfully expressed insight herein, christine.
very much moved,
peace & blessings,
carolyn
A very touching write well done indeed as the picture is so sweet Laura
Reviewed by RWE SAYS BYE (Reader)
Reviewed on August 22, 2011
ahh... but then... the nothing that was there merely masked the everything she would yet become... emptiness is sometimes fuller than one might seem. In the stillness of remembering comes a moment to cherish more than forever. Peace Christine.
This is a wonderful, apt metaphor, like when the soul needs to go deep into questions, suffering...in the dark, or too this reminds me of the loneliness and darkness a chrysalis has to endure as she waits for her new life and can't go back into her old one even if she wants to...
I hope this is not auto-biographical and if it is just know how celebrated and exquisite you honestly are!
I have gotten too gabby :)
Blessings,
Christine
Robin Ouzman Hislop's poetry is certainly in dialogue with some of the key architects of the 'poetics of indeterminacy' – both the Modernist strands represented by the likes of Beckett and Stein, and the postmodernist strands represented, initially,
A people’s heart can be found in their poetic words. In history men and women have stood firmly upon their soapboxes and street corners, rallying the deepest beliefs of people to rise up and be heard. The poetrypages.com has offered that voice a new
From First Love to its destructive end and on to new beginnings, Mary Angela Nangini's poems explore the birth and death of a relationship. The powerful poems are presented in two parts with an introduction to her next book My Ontario Beautiful. (Th
Regis
Axilea
Yours in the love of Christ,
John Michael Domino
Then give me shout
I'll come running.
Cause I think you're really something special!!
(I keep a jaw breaker in my back pocket)
powerfully expressed insight herein, christine.
very much moved,
peace & blessings,
carolyn
about a new awakening of self worth!
~Christine~
from your soft shell philosophy!!
Lady Vivian
love Emile
even if at times you feel that way
and we all feel that way sometimes;
taut and pointed, resonant.
John
Roger
Hugs,
Anna
Peace, love and light,
Amber
I hope this is not auto-biographical and if it is just know how celebrated and exquisite you honestly are!
I have gotten too gabby :)
Blessings,
Christine
GOD BLESS YOU
Tony