A heart wrenching poem. The words are very well executed. They reach out and grab the reader. There is a sign of hope here that is good to see. Great work, Dawn.
Robin Ouzman Hislop's poetry is certainly in dialogue with some of the key architects of the 'poetics of indeterminacy' – both the Modernist strands represented by the likes of Beckett and Stein, and the postmodernist strands represented, initially,
First Edition Translation of Teselas by Carmen Crespo X111 César Simón Poetry Prixe 2016 Translated from Spanish by Robin Ouzman Hislop and Amparo Arrospíde
you've certainly built a very moving poem ...
Love & Light,
Joseph
A moving piece Dawn.
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Well done!!
Love Tinka
Love,
Eileen