I push and push into the silence that stretches forever and hope crowns… fullness is born from surrender of self and falls soft as snowy grace on these once-barren fields.
Cries come to fill with life the empty left inside and I hear the future footsteps of these red-faced ideas kicking and screaming until they collapse in sweet peace, safe, swaddled and sung back to sleep.
Alive and growing within my care, spirited thought draws energy, dancing through days until sunset comes and night accepts everything that buds, blossoms and breaks loose.
It is that occasional episode of breaking-loose that renders the path to culmination tolerable... Beautifully expressed wisdom, Dawn; ditto Eileen!
Peace and Blessings,
Carolyn
:) How softly sweet are your words, and quickening thoughts, Dawn! Every verse starts with ambivalence of self, and self, and ends with the honey of thought and pollination of what is seen once as obstuseness, budded into eternity, because It can...
Yes. Yes. And when they blossom into poetry, a miracle occurs. This, my dear, is beautifully inspiring! Thank you for your words this evening.
My favorite stanza:
"Alive
and growing
within my care,
spirited thought draws
energy, dancing through days
until sunset comes and night
accepts everything that buds,
blossoms and breaks loose."
From First Love to its destructive end and on to new beginnings, Mary Angela Nangini's poems explore the birth and death of a relationship. The powerful poems are presented in two parts with an introduction to her next book My Ontario Beautiful. (Th
Good job.
Bobbi
Love Tinka
Take care,
Sherry
Serenely delightful...
Peace and Blessings,
Carolyn
Beautiful form, superb poetry!
Eileen^
As always, Dawn,
I remain yours,
Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
Peter
Yes. Yes. And when they blossom into poetry, a miracle occurs. This, my dear, is beautifully inspiring! Thank you for your words this evening.
My favorite stanza:
"Alive
and growing
within my care,
spirited thought draws
energy, dancing through days
until sunset comes and night
accepts everything that buds,
blossoms and breaks loose."
BRAVA!!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. *applause*