Wonderful build to this poem, Dawn, and the construct is strong. But I particularly love the last section which, for me, could stand alone. Brilliant! Fantastically sustained and well-focussed. We are brought as readers into the single focal-point of your gaze and enjoy with you that single point of connection. Great poem, thank you. Kate xx
Dawn this outstanding poem is so perfectly written it left me breathless! Each "single point of connection" led to another one
in exquisite sharing that touches the heart ,and ends with a glorious hope! Masterpiece!Kudo's!
Welcome!
The poems in this beautifully bound book are a result of over twenty years of observations. Observations of the world around us and on the telecommunications network. All of the hate, love, heroism, disasters, and those who help.
Beautif
your best yet, me thinks! ;-)
peace and blessings, poetess,
carolyn
Love Tinka
in exquisite sharing that touches the heart ,and ends with a glorious hope! Masterpiece!Kudo's!
Love,
Eileen
Beautiful, poignant, haunting lines--well done.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.