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Burnt Hearts
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conversations about emotion
easy talk about love and trust
words flow like the tide of an ocean
curiosity about wants and lust.


people wrapped up in discussion
writer’s pen and notes they share
just a liking turns into a passion
open feelings they now bare.


misconceptions quickly rise
misunderstandings to say the least
communications slip on ice
paining thoughts have been released.


lonely souls been disappointed
weightless words caused so much pain
never more than just acquainted
burnt hearts will dare to feel again.










 
 
 
 
 


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 Reviews of "Burnt Hearts"
Reviewed on February 2, 2008
I hope not, MISUNDERSTANDINGS should always be cleared up, to a happier soul!
Many times the inspiration just beckons on and on and on... as much is spilled in the lines!
Love this poem (got me thinking)sad feeling as expressed, I hope it's noticed!
YOur talent shows Beck! :)
Write ON!
Warmest Blessings, LOVE, Inner LIGHT, and Hugs, Warrior Purple Lady Sweet Sheooxoo

STay Positive!

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on January 21, 2008
enjoyed the write--it speaks of being hurt and the pain of which is tough to come back from

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on January 21, 2008
Superb poem
After I got burnt the fist time
it took me a long time to feel love again
Stay safe
Ron

Reviewed by ellen george
Reviewed on January 21, 2008
Once burnt, twice shy, isn't that the old saying?
And quite true - when we have been hurt by one's words, it cuts to the bone. And it is very hard to bounce back - lonely souls been disappointed...all of us can relate.
Another gorgeous poem, Becca!
becka

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on January 21, 2008
The ability to say what is in one's heart and be honest with oneself while you speak the words is one that often hard to learn and even harder to use. Fear, pain, ego and other human emotions tend to pile on the band wagon and what starts out as a simple phrase like "I like you" becomes somthing vague and uncummunicable like "
gee we have so much in common and if I wasn't this or you wern't that and if we don't talk about such and such, or if we do we must call it such and such...etc." So if you want to communicate from the heart keep the words from the heart. Well expressed write Becca.
Fee

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on January 21, 2008
When feelings are expressed they may conflict and if you don't compromise, end of conversation.


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