Awesome Mariner's dream and plea. This is a wonderful yearning that came from the gut of an ancient mariner. I know these people from the past. They come to sewnd messages to the selected . They want their dreams and adventures to live on. Awesome John. I want to see mo9re of you through these writes. Your Muse has a voice through you.
Love,
Susan
Thanks John for this wonderfully written piece
most enjoyable reading
Peace be with you
William
Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)
Reviewed on September 5, 2007
Just ad this excellent one to the collection; still working on the info, all the best, love Holly
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on September 5, 2007
Hell, man, you have gone and written a very good "message" peice of literary poetry . . . Nice wordplay which gives the reader cause to reflect upon their own ship of dreams . . .
"...leaving tears at the stern..." how many sailors have done that...
Yourself as a ship confronting all the storms and hurricanes of life, and, those moments when you are in sight of that rare island in the middle of nowhere but on a calm seas.
Great.
Georg
“The woman or man who is a poet, or fiction writer, or playwright, or all of these, is engaged constantly in a jazz ballet of vocabularies, passions, genders, histories, perspectives, death, love, and life. The music of revelation announces itself to
Love,
Susan
Be safe,
Karen
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Regis
most enjoyable reading
Peace be with you
William
Sigh.....brought back memories of my cruise two years ago. Beautiful.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Yourself as a ship confronting all the storms and hurricanes of life, and, those moments when you are in sight of that rare island in the middle of nowhere but on a calm seas.
Great.
Georg
Kathy