someone hurt someone cries out for help today i hear them...
i do not cry for help today for i have wiped tears on other occasions with other feelings with other thoughts with other gray areas in the grayness of other afternoons unlike this one...
the grayness around this afternoon sees my smile hides from my happiness and feels no comfort in the calmness i feel now at this time this moment this day gray in thought overcast with feeling.
Overcast with feelings, only those that had suffered the lost of many near his heart can understand as they brush away the easy comfort coming from the ones that never saw a friend dying on a strange land.
Overcast with feelings is a right one have.
Excellent!
Georg
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Newfie Hugs, Rose
Be safe,
Karen
Enjoyed your write
Peace be with you
William
Eileen
This one gets into the soul and lingers like rain...powerfully emotive write. Well done.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Susan
nice work...
Art Sun...
Although sad, it is an honest picture of a down day.
Thanks
Best regards,
Chris
Overcast with feelings is a right one have.
Excellent!
Georg