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escape velocity
by John W Leko → (All Poetry by John W Leko)
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lantern lights listen
to the laughter of friends
while the table round
memories sit
rising
as if a séance of hugs
has brought the moon
to full
in a desert of open minds.

dated hearts of palm
become orchestral waves
amongst hands in motion
swayed
by years spent together
sharing stories
with the island spirit
of an ocean unseen.

crickets dance
to the music
of unaccountable martinis
on hand cut pathways
stoned
in honeysuckle madness
and 1930’s bungalow dreams
where hope springs
upon an era
lined with palms
no longer to be read
on a lost getaway
of ancient stars
found within
a colony
of forgotten sands eternity.

yet centered souls
surround themselves
some
like tarnished brass
the color of the wicked lamp
before them
while something smooth
scented
like kerosene
keeps the flame alive
when the fire of compassion
is lost
and the dim memory
of a globe and its people
see reflection
in a glass chimney
become soot
over oil
and darkened dust of time.

while mountains hold close
heated thoughts
melt down
as echoes of coyote
remain silent
in the moon’s debauched glow
and like a gypsy moth
far from my roots
I make my way around
the warming globe
in search of light
with broken wing
and a prayer
for my inevitable exodus.


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 Reviews of "escape velocity"
Reviewed by Michael Guy
Reviewed on June 1, 2008
I never answered this one because you posted on the day my cat died so... just a question: where were you at one of those boring, snooty S. Cal formals where the conversation was all stocks, latest Dr.'s news and who got the newest facelift, so you drove on out into the desert and home to the imagery and sounds of that lovely LAST STANZA or was it "The LAST RESORT"?

Reviewed by Axilea MU
Reviewed on May 11, 2008
The readers' senses are awakened by this particular atmosphere.
I love the "desert of open minds".

Axilea

Reviewed by Theresa Koch
Reviewed on May 9, 2008
Exceptional imagery~`*

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on May 8, 2008
John this is a magnificent poem with the journey of a soul beautifully defined in splendid imagery! So glad I didn't miss it!

Love,
ET

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on May 8, 2008
Oustanding poetic Wite John
Great imagery
Peace be with you

William

Reviewed by Katie Gabrielle
Reviewed on May 6, 2008
I like this "surreal" world you paint with words and how the senses of the atmosphere play a part of your poetry! You seem to hone in on a by gone era and I especially like the way you describe the crickets dancing to the music of the martini's...it just goes to show you that one's whole life perspective can change with a few...its very relaxed and observant and wonderful poetry...nice imagery!

good job

katie

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on May 5, 2008
There is so much to reflect upon in your verses here, John. This is worthy of much more than a single reading. Thank you. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed on May 5, 2008
I love it when I stumble upon a writer whose works I haven't read before. Your comment on my poem, "End of an Affair and Oreos" led me to seek you out John and consequently travel through some great writing. May your pen never run dry - your talent excels.
Marcia
thewritingforum.net

Reviewed on May 5, 2008
enjoyed reading this verse John, that last line stuck deep, but I guess sooner or later we have to make an exodus

Reviewed by Douglas Bentley
Reviewed on May 4, 2008
John, this poem explodes and takes off. Has a great opening
stanza, then races upward. I like the fact that you didn't use
the title in the poem. Gives one much to ponder upon.
Very well done.
Doug

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on May 4, 2008
Pleasing images and philosophical incites.

Ron

Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)
Reviewed on May 3, 2008
Welcome back John....it is always a pleasure to read your work! Always, love Holly

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce
Reviewed on May 3, 2008
Oh, John! This one so well-written!!! Close knit and wonderful useage of words!!!

Sandie May :o)

Reviewed by Michelle Mead
Reviewed on May 3, 2008
Wow, this is excellent, the adventurer's soul laid bare and the way time changes the places we once knew, and off we go into these other worlds of nature and light.

Reviewed by Debra Kraft
Reviewed on May 2, 2008
I love the alliteration, the imagery, the entire opening just pulled me right in. Very nice.

Reviewed by David Thompson
Reviewed on May 1, 2008
What a description of your time away from us. I always feel inadequate at uttering even one syllable about your writing. I leave, wondering: did I misinterpret his thoughts; have I said enough about the beauty of his interwoven imagery; did I praise his expression sufficiently; and will I ever have even a fleeting thought with the same power and splendor as one stroke of his pen. Welcome home, prodigal son. Now we shall kill the fatted calf and call for a time of merriment.

David

Reviewed by Ingeborg von Finsterwalde (Reader)
Reviewed on April 30, 2008
A holiday in the desert, the sounds of crickets dancing, the howl of a coyote in the distance are balsam for the soul. Thank you for a wonderful excursion through time spend " of forgotten sands eternity."

Ingeborg



Reviewed by Gerard Gauthier (Reader)
Reviewed on April 30, 2008
lantern lights listen as John escapes to his world and returns with pictures...Great read Gerard

Reviewed by Bonnie May
Reviewed on April 30, 2008
This beautiful mystical write is so inspiring and touching. That vacation did its job my friend. Keep writing. Love, Bonnie

Reviewed on April 30, 2008
Your writing runs deep from observance and experience. Great insight, John! Very well put! Will be reading more of you....

In Spirit,
Bear

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on April 30, 2008
John, today's young will tell you that escape velocity is the one needed to travel to the stars, the old ones the velocity of the bullet going to the enemy soldier on the other side, then, here comes you with a different kind of acceleration, a kind of literary parsec warp travelling with the howl of your coyote or the laugh of your friends.

Georg

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on April 29, 2008
Truly, truly beautiful writing. The imagery astounding...and the spiritual feel...it's almost mystical. It's as though you transported me into that which you wrote about...like a dream.

Reviewed by Mary Patterson
Reviewed on April 29, 2008
Mesmerizing, enchanting. Great images. Words wrap them selves around each other to draw the reader into the poem. ....M PS, I HOPE YOU HAD A NICE TIME!

Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on April 29, 2008
It has been a while John. Your work is unbelievably wonderful. Good to see another of your masterpieces. Jon Michael Willey

Reviewed by Charlie
Reviewed on April 29, 2008
Oh... What a comeback! Awesome. I love the seance of hands swaying, and the 30's bungalow (I LOVE those old craftsman houses!) And the warm globe-- fabulous. --Charlie

Reviewed by Myrna Badgerow
Reviewed on April 29, 2008
How good it is to have you back!! I have missed your words.. And you bring us this right at the start?

I make my way around
the warming globe
in search of light
with broken wing
and a prayer
for my inevitable exodus.

I just can never say enough about your imagery and wordage.. just wonderful!!

As always, Myrna

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on April 29, 2008
Wow! In search of a spiritual realm, well written....

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on April 29, 2008
I will have to start calling you the the-imagery-man
Fantastic work John
Good to have you back
Ron

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on April 29, 2008
Yes! You have the soul of a Gypsy Moth. I know...me too! Glad you're back safely. How was the trip?
Blessings and love,
Susan

Reviewed by blue soplain (Reader)
Reviewed on April 29, 2008
mon dieu! the sultry sweet soft countenance of eras and eros and earth.ly pursuits...a great stone gatsby standing guard over timelessness and waiting for the remains of the day to steal a glance, to breathe in the last lilting light; all that allitertaion so subtly amgnificent. ..
even the air was captured by these words.
a vignette of society and social impropriety. .. of self reflective and introspectiveness as well. . .what happens when our own lights flicker and wane??? can others see us? who cna save us and rekindle?? can we keep our selves lit up from within and without??? egads, and mon dieu for this again and again and again. ..
most beautiful thing ive read. .. in a while.. ..
m mm
ness

Reviewed by Cryssa C
Reviewed on April 29, 2008
Superb imagery...I can feel the warmth of the night air and the lantern light and the warmth of friends...sharing... The last stanza is absolute perfection! I love the analogy of the moth circling the globe.

Good to have you back from vacation! I've missed your....'s (hee, hee...)
Cryssa :~)

Reviewed by Bernice Angoh
Reviewed on April 29, 2008
Beautiful images fill my mind and I know for sure you were one of those souls seated at that round table..were you talking about 1930's bungalow dreams...hmm sweet memories. I hope they all came to pass, those dreams spoken of laughter with friends, those moments that gave the moon its fullness...I have a feeling this is why you went into the desert to have those memories sit again...and that inevitable exit was it from this world you talk about or from your journey?

I could read this a million times and get different meaning everytime, that is why you are as good as you are, you get minds working...and that's a very hard thing to do...As always another master piece. Welcome back!

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on April 29, 2008
there is so much here and so well penned--i enjoy your writing

Reviewed by Gianetta Ellis (Reader)
Reviewed on April 29, 2008
Can I get away with copying and pasting Kate's review here? I couldn't express it better than she.

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on April 29, 2008
My, my, for awhile there I thought I was back in the sixties and the commune was doing its thing in the cool desert air . . . But no, you took me as far from that faux community as is possible into another realm of consciousness and awareness, until finally and superbly you gave me you, and all that you are in your beautiful quest . . .

Reviewed on April 29, 2008
Wonderful detailed imagery. Takes me (and readers) away from everyday nonsense and creates a splendid dream-like state which is the essence of excellent writing! Bravo :)

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on April 29, 2008
Gosh you took me to my parents cabin, In the middle of no where on Namakan Lake,,, The kerosine lamps glowing reflections of laughter of loved ones,, in the midst of wild calls,, loons, wolves,, birds,,
This is so heartfelt,,, :)
Christine

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on April 29, 2008
You always give us such a rich and dramatic canvas to work from, John. This is, as usual with your writing, a feast for the physical senses and a banquet for the cinematic and poetic mind. We have everything here... time warps, a strong sense of place and the interaction of the real and surreal. In fact, everything that concocts in an atmospheric evening shared amongst close friends where wine and feelings run high; where there is history and a strong sense of bonding; where love and laughter and the shared time of past, present and sense of a journeying future run through the subliminal webbing of the hazy evening spent in each other's company. Quality time out... together and alone in the centre of it all, focussing down on that telling detail and significance of the moth. As always, the magnetism of your work is astounding. I love the way you draw our hearts, minds and eye to that centrifugal and intriguing image, the moth round the lit globe... a different significance for each reader and each character drawn around your table. Has a very Colonial feel to me. Very modern-day Kipling! I love it! :)) TY Kate xx

Reviewed on April 29, 2008
John,

Must agree: great work. Love the imagery, particularly,

" ...crickets dance
to the music
of unaccountable martinis ...." <---delightful atmosphere you set

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Shedding Light
Reviewed on April 29, 2008
This is great work.

Harold M. Nash

Reviewed on April 29, 2008
A memorable story with brilliant visions you give us, John! Your words seem to take us from...beginning to the end...of a time or lifetime. Good...very good, friend!
Blessings and Appreciation ~~ Micke


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