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My Brother's Feet (Children)
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My Brother's Feet My brother's feet are stinky and he's hard to sit beside. Mom makes him take his sneakers off and leave them. They're outside. She really shouldn't do that. It's not something she can hide 'cause he brings the smell right with him on his socks and feet inside. EWW! That smell is really awful! His feet must be nearby. Gee, my brother isn't home now ... oh my gosh, it's mine!

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Reviewed by Rusty Daily

Reviewed on November 13, 2006

If ever there was a real life author, it is you. You paint these homespun pictures of life like old what's his name on the cover of Life Magazine.
At at arms distance hugs
Rusty

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on October 2, 2006

LOL--glad you can't smell mine *p-ew!* LOL My favorite pair of tennies stunk so bad, my twin incenerated them! LOL Glad me feet weren't in them..............LOL

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. *well done*

Reviewed by J M (Reader)

Reviewed on October 1, 2006

This is delightful I love your style....

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on September 30, 2006

LOL This is a cute lesson in himility as seen through the eyes of a child. Well done and a good message again.

Fee

Reviewed by Peter Paton

Reviewed on September 30, 2006

CJ

Time for a nice warm footbath...and then some cool deoderant...;)
Works a treat everytime...

Hugs

Peter

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on September 30, 2006

hahaha and you admit it;-) Some people have such terrible foot odor you could get sick from smelling it. My brother-in law for one. Poor guy;-) I remembr hearing that a few drops of formaldehyde in water, killed the smell;-)This was very well written, CJ!...Eileen

Reviewed by H. Lena Jones

Reviewed on September 30, 2006

Hi CJ, that was quite a twist at the end. Amusing...made me smile! Thankfully, all my brothers live far away, and I don't have any kids...so stinky feet are foreign to me. :) Well done!

God Bless
Love, Lena

Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)

Reviewed on September 30, 2006

CJ, that was quite an ending. We all have trouble with our feet, which is why I try to wear sandals as much as possible. For the children, this should be hilarious. Victor

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling

Reviewed on September 30, 2006

Love it...you never cease to amaze me! This reminds me of when my children were both at home, yes my son's shoes often found a home at night on the porch...we did this until a cat decided they would be a wonderful litter box! Needless to say they were thrown away....Love you work!
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on September 30, 2006

Whahahaha....this is good!!

Thanks for the smile!!

love Tinka

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on September 30, 2006

LOL loved the ending :-)

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