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Stupid Tongues (Children)
by CJ Heck → (All Poetry by CJ Heck)
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Stupid Tongues

I know our tongues have jobs to do,
licking lips or tasting food.
They also help us say our words
and see if our teeth are smooth.

After that, a tongue gets stupid,
stupid, stupid tongue ...
Tongues don't seem to listen
and tongues act really dumb.

When we have a sharp loose tooth,
we tell our tongue to stay away
because it's really sharp right there
but tongues just won't behave.

Your tongue gets sore and it hurts to talk.
Your brain says, 'Tongue, don't take that walk! '
But tongues won't listen (or tongues don't care),
and pretty soon it goes back there,

and the more it does, the more it hurts.
It just won't listen and I don't know
why it sneaks right back
when your brain says 'NO'.

I know my tongue is helpful
and I'm glad I do have one ...
but why are tongues so stupid?
Why are tongues so dumb?


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 Reviews of "Stupid Tongues (Children)"
Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)
Reviewed on October 2, 2006
mmmm..indeed they DO get carried away..
love this!


Vesna:)

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on October 2, 2006
Oh they can be VERY dumb...and can say the weirdest things...specially trying to speak english.....lol!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed on October 2, 2006
LOL--much truth in this one, CJ, our tongues can be our undoing. Well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by A PAX
Reviewed on October 2, 2006
LOL
soooooooo true
this is so cute........

Reviewed by K. Mulroney
Reviewed on October 2, 2006
LOL! You do NOT want to know the trouble MY tongue has caused. I always say "God keep your hand on my shoulder and the other over my mouth"! great as usual!

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on October 1, 2006
The tongue is many things, how clever of you to show its good and bad points, with humor! Another winner!

Eileen

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on October 1, 2006
Thank you for sharing wisdom through you wit, CJ. Love and peace,

Regis

Reviewed by H. Lena Jones
Reviewed on October 1, 2006
This one made me smile with its accuracy, CJ. The tongue is particularly stupid when you have a tooth that's shaky. It just won't leave it alone until it uproots it! :) You're so clever with these children's poems. Love them!

God Bless
Love, Lena

Reviewed by J M (Reader)
Reviewed on October 1, 2006
You teach simple truths in such a child like manner and delightful to read saving this one to share with some little tongues I know..

Bless you CJ

Joselyn

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on October 1, 2006
This is so true CJ and aplies to adults as well as children.

fee

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling
Reviewed on October 1, 2006
This poem is great for the young and old alike...I think the tongue is the hardest thing I have to control...it's a daily chore. I will enjoy reading this to my students who also have a hard time with the control of their tongue...great job.
blessings,
Joyce Bowling

Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)
Reviewed on October 1, 2006
A poem fit for grown ups also since some ought to mind how they use their tongues. Victor

Reviewed by Peter Paton
Reviewed on October 1, 2006
CJ

Brings to mind the three wise monkeys and their theme.." See no evil, hear no evil, and speak no evil.."..

When the heart controls the tongue, then all is well...;-)

Neat write from your quickfire pen..

Cheers

Peter


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