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Trading Places
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If you've noticed they come in all these different colors but they always taste the same!


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Trading Places

 

You can tell by where the lines are drawn in his face –

He’s fought each battle between a rock and a hard place

Some want the victory, but none of the war,

Or at least one that they can win.

 

Some choose their weapons but not their words,

So choosing wisely you ask him:

‘What would you do, would he trade places with you?’

And if you could both live all over again,

            Knowing what life has in store for you now,

And if you were told how to begin,

Would you feel that you’ve chose your end, somehow?

 

Every other sail on the horizon sails fuller than your own –

From your hill, the valley is greener beyond

While you were dreaming, life goes on,

            so before we’re gone ….

 

You may think his sunrise is your sunset

But you can pretend all you want to,

            The cards are dealt, and

            Your money is bet.

Would you trade off all to play his hand?

 

None of us can be said to fully understand

Trading places is not as simple as choosing a new name

            (or dealing into a new game, is it?)

(but) choose another card and

            Keep playing the game,

            Keep playing the game.

Trading places is not so simple as choosing a name -

            Choose another card and

            Keep playing the game.

 

c. 2003 michael a. guy

[not typed from journal until 1/14/2003]

 
 


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Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on September 2, 2007
A puzzle if it could be done but we all have to play the hand we were given, win, lose or draw.

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on September 2, 2007
Can't say that there is another's life I would want to live.

Interesting perspective.

Ro

Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)
Reviewed on August 31, 2007
Many think they are wise when they are not, some believe everything given to them is fate. Others choose to wish upon a star forever, and end up going no where.
Happiness comes from deep within, and being able to put into practice what we've learned.
Excellent thoughts Michael, God Bless, Holly

Reviewed by Larry Lounsbury
Reviewed on August 30, 2007
The cards were are dealt sometimes must be held. Like that Kenny Rogers song "You got to know when to hold em, know when to fold em". Then somehow what was meant to be will bloosom when you least expect it. Enjoyed

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on August 29, 2007
Oh my,wonderful writing,love this michael....Great job...Have a wonderful day ok...HUgsssssssssss
Love,
Chanti Lace

Reviewed by John Leko
Reviewed on August 29, 2007
Interesting write Michael...always good to choose another card...keep playing the game...and not get lost in the shuffle.
John

Reviewed on August 28, 2007
Ahhhh, My passion candy!
I loved this poem!
so much to ponder deeply through of reality!
A gem I will treasure!
Thank you for this offerering Michael, from your heart of hearts!
Warmed in Inner Peace, LOVE, Light and Wisdom! Warrior Purple Lady Sheeoox

STay Positive!
STay SAFE!
Miss your inspirations~

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on August 28, 2007
Fantastic, kept my attention all the way through! You pose a very interesting question for many to ponder over.....

Be safe,
Karen

Reviewed by blue soplain (Reader)
Reviewed on August 28, 2007
sticky little web youve woven here;
when i cant find words to articulate what i want, that is when i know soemthing i have read is REAL for me
egads. .. this is. ..
hmmmmmmmm
ness

Reviewed on August 28, 2007
The grass is always greener on the other side , I agree with Karla!
It's a very thought provocing and well penned poem Michea.
Bless! Jasmin Horst

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on August 28, 2007
You give much to ponder upon here, Michael. Thank you. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Jennave Coz
Reviewed on August 28, 2007
I have not the courage...to choose his life, nor win his fight...I like this work, I will consider him with more compassion than before.Thank you for sharing this thought provoking write.Jen

Reviewed by D Johnson
Reviewed on August 28, 2007
Michael, the last verse, especially, is very lyrical, not to mention filled with the message.

Welcome to AD

Thanks for writing,
Dan

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on August 28, 2007
Trading places can work if you want to have a house swap. You come stay at mine and I will come stay at yours...That is a cool trading. As far as a life, well I love my life and where I have been and where I am, and who knows where I am going, but I wouldn't trade any of it for anything!
Lovely thought provoking poem!
Peace, Love, and Light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed by Kathy Armijo
Reviewed on August 28, 2007
Reading your poem made me sad as I remembered the times in my life where I would easily and without a second thought traded places with my sons [3 sons illness and deaths]. Fortunately and blessedly, God helped me "keep playing the hand." Your voice is clear and sensitive. THANK YOU! God's blessing to you. Kathy

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on August 28, 2007
Trading places is not as simple as choosing a new name

It truly never is, but we must all continue to play that game called life, our own way.

Reviewed by chris stienstra (Reader)
Reviewed on August 28, 2007
Very nicely done! We all wish we could trade places at some time in our lives, but, we all keep playing the game. I enjoyed this very much. Thank you.
Chris

Reviewed on August 28, 2007
Some profound thoughts Michael, no I'd be afraid to trade places with anyone, since only the surface is usually visible. Enjoyed.

Reviewed on August 28, 2007
Good morning, Michael,

What a thought provoker you pen: we think we have it bad, but have no idea what another has until we walk a mile in their shoes. Well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, karla.


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