This is the poem I wrote which let me discover that I COULD write poetry. It is very special because it is about my father's love.
He never told me he loved me – at least I don’t recall.
He was father to seven kids and I know he loved us all.
He worked long hours every day – long as he was able
Just to put food upon our meager table.
He took us all to church whenever Sunday came
But had to miss, because of work, most every baseball game.
His approval seemed evident when I heard the call of God.
And at my first sermon he affirmed it with a nod.
He visited our house not long after we were wed.
He glanced into my office and not a word was said.
I know he saw my make-shift desk
Two orange crates and some wood.
And I thought nothing of it as he left and said, “Be good!”
About a week or maybe two I had some very strange luck.
There was a great big package delivered by a truck.
We cut the tape and pulled the sides apart so we could see
A brand new metal desk my father sent to me.
Although he couldn’t afford it
He bought this for his boy.
And he knew what he had given me was much more than a toy.
The desk is now rusted and broken
The evidence of years and wear.
It still stands in my house – unused
With “I love you” written everywhere!
After you reviewed my DADDY'S WORDS poem, I just had to read some of your works. I'm not ashamed to tell you that this one misted my eyes. There is so much material on this site that it's difficult to visit them all, but I shall return to your's. Thank you for your kind words. Be Happy, Dick
Oh Larry this is so beautifully touching and loving...It is so wonderful that you realize some people don't say I love you enough, but find so many beautiful ways of showing it bye this Old metal desk...How simply lovely and heart touching...God Bless you my friend...and yes, you are a poet indeed. Love and hugs, Bonnie
This poem made me cry, such a wonderful gift.
Some of the older generation never knew how to show their love, but they loved deeply just the same. I remember once someone said to me that a person loves in the only way they know and who are we to judge if that is right or wrong. Your father expressed his love in this wonderful present.
Perhaps "..Quiet Storm" will help rekindle old flames buried and long forgotten or express the love so deeply locked inside of your soul longing to be released.
Regardless of where you may be found in love this beautiful masterpiece can be
And yes, a poet ye be.
Walt
Some of the older generation never knew how to show their love, but they loved deeply just the same. I remember once someone said to me that a person loves in the only way they know and who are we to judge if that is right or wrong. Your father expressed his love in this wonderful present.