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I Made The Three Nails
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The craftsman who made the nails that were used to nail Christ to the Cross is speaking to us about what went on in his heart and mind.



A Roman soldier came into my shop
and told me that I must come to a stop.
He had a big special order for me.
Make the roughest nails and he wanted three.
He said to be sure they were very rough
for this guy who hadn’t suffered enough.
I must admit that I’m good at my craft
and I could help give this fellow the shaft.

Later in the day I went out to see
the guy who would suffer because of me.
I watched as they drove my nails in his skin
and some of his blood gushed out on my chin.
Just at that moment his eyes looked at me
and his forgiveness was all I could see
I stood with people and watched him die
and constantly wiped a tear from my eye.

“forgive them they don’t know what they have done”
was his prayer I heard and wanted to run.
My legs wouldn’t move so I looked above
and his eyes seemed to tell me of his love.
Both hurting and healing at the same time
I grieved that I was part of the crime.
By my good work he was nailed to a tree
but his death gave true life to you and me.


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 Reviews of "I Made The Three Nails"
Reviewed by Kathy Armijo
Reviewed on February 26, 2008
Larry - I'm at a loss for words. True sadness that it is our sins that also nailed Him. [weeping]

God bless you. Kathy

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on February 24, 2008
Larry, you have given us a little bit of history from that times by writing from each individual, but this one from the smith is the one to remember, because he saw into His eyes...

Georg

Reviewed by John Leko
Reviewed on February 23, 2008
...well penned story...through the eyes...of a different creator...one of three nails.
very well done Larry...
John

Reviewed by Rafiriio Daniels
Reviewed on February 23, 2008
great job....

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on February 23, 2008
I can't help but think of the novel, "The Wandering Jew," by Eugene Sue about a man who refused Jesus a drink of water as he carried the Cross up the hill . . . He was cursed to walk the earth doing good work until the Second Coming . . . The novel was fraught with socialist ideas, but the legend behind the work is fasinating . . . Good work here on "I Made The Three Nails."

Reviewed on February 23, 2008
Powerfully penned, Larry, well done -

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed on February 23, 2008
Powerful offering, Larry; bravo!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :(


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