I must say I am really impressed at your ability to express yourself. This write has so much to offer, imagery, rythem, feelings and a strong message that the cycle can be broken. Welcome to the den Natasha...I know I will enjoy your work.
Fee
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on September 3, 2007
Great rhyme and metre here.
And a very intelligent and clever rant...
most bad emotions come from holding on to the past.
yet if one thinks of how one feels with a job promotion, pay rise, a new this or that. Then compare it to the feeling of looking in to someone you loves eyes, or a nice evening with friends. the first is false happiness the latter is true love and happiness....
Natasha, the writing here is absolutely amazing! The reality of the pain stirs this reader's souls as i am a survivor of much and i am a teacher of young teens who are dealing with emotional trauma--this poem has touched me deeply, karen
Sweetheart never let hate take a part of you , for you are too beautiful a person and you have too much love to share, so smile first thing every morning and thank God above for your life and those around you that adore you for you and yes I am one of those people.
Love as always and hugs for you, Rose
From First Love to its destructive end and on to new beginnings, Mary Angela Nangini's poems explore the birth and death of a relationship. The powerful poems are presented in two parts with an introduction to her next book My Ontario Beautiful. (Th
This book represents a thirty-day period of my poetry journal. Each poem addresses
the dominant thoughts occupying my mind during the early morning hours of a given
day.
Fee
And a very intelligent and clever rant...
most bad emotions come from holding on to the past.
yet if one thinks of how one feels with a job promotion, pay rise, a new this or that. Then compare it to the feeling of looking in to someone you loves eyes, or a nice evening with friends. the first is false happiness the latter is true love and happiness....
Very talented poem...
Love as always and hugs for you, Rose