Lay me down (poem) by Bernice Angoh on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on November 14, 2007

That is togetherness in action facing the age of times...
"Lay me down" sings to the union of spirit and the spirit of unity with the voice that never grows old.

In admiration,

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on November 12, 2007

This is a superb poem which I'm glad I got the chance to read! Thank you for sharing!

ET

Reviewed by Michael Guy

Reviewed on November 6, 2007

Very original love poem, I love the "cycle of nature" projecting your physical lives together into the next spiritual birth. LIke the sweetness of fallen apples, decaying into new life beneath the eternal apple tree of life. You might like my poem "Intitials Carved in Love" written for my dearly departed parents.
blessings

Reviewed by Samuel Stone

Reviewed on October 26, 2007

A very beautiful and powerful poem.. Enjoyed the read... Wishing you well...Sam

Reviewed by William Heffner

Reviewed on October 26, 2007

Well done, thanks for sharing. God Bless You and Your Fruitful, Inspiring Husband.

If you get time read "My Rainbow's End" inspired by my wonderful wife.

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on October 24, 2007

Bernice,

What a beautiful thought to be able to connect so perfectly with each other, even in death. Roots that are eternal will surely run deep. Thank You also for commenting on my poem. Blessings to You Always, Paul.

Reviewed by Afrika Abney

Reviewed on October 9, 2007

What an awesome write! Thank you for sharing this piece with us!

Reviewed by S. Thompson

Reviewed on October 8, 2007

This is a beautiful poem. The pear tree and the clinging roots...paints a beautiful picture and feelings of LOVE--very powerful.

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on October 1, 2007

Beautifully meaningful verses, Bernice. Thank you for sharing them. Welcome to AD. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Ann Marquette

Reviewed on September 25, 2007

Beautiful Bernice...I am reminded of the movie The Notebook...you need a box of tissues to watch it. Yet I found my tears not of sadness but of joy.

ann

Reviewed by Gloria Gay

Reviewed on September 20, 2007

Beautiful, lyrical, musical.

Reviewed by Vernelle Edwards

Reviewed on September 19, 2007

Wow! "Lay me Down" is one of the most beautiful poems I have ever read. It speaks of eternity, the afterlife, and everlasting one love.

Reviewed by April Smith (Reader)

Reviewed on September 18, 2007

How beautiful you paint life after death (after life?). I enjoyed this poem! April

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on September 17, 2007

Absolutely a beautiful poetic piece
Enjoyed
Peace be with you

Love
William

Reviewed by M. Kenneth Coleman (Reader)

Reviewed on September 17, 2007

You've painted a beautiful picture of eternal love. Fruits in life, fruits in death. What a romantic idea.

Reviewed by Mary Coe

Reviewed on September 16, 2007

Well penned. I enjoyed the read.

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on September 14, 2007

When in bloom, singing bees will visit <--- Buzzy, buzzy, buzzy bee,
Buzzing round from tree to tree.
Buzzy, buzzy, buzzy bee.. lol Sorry...
Deep spiro write, love the metaphors and visuals this paints...
Death where is thy sting (no pun about bees) this brings to mind..

Reviewed by Liana Margiva

Reviewed on September 12, 2007

Beautiful, very beautiful and talented!!!!!!!!! Your words are from my heart!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Morning Star

Reviewed on September 5, 2007

Very beautifully written your words come to life
Your words have captured a stunning view of your
Spiritual thoughts!
Excellent tone and flow
Outstanding write!!
Love Peace and Hugsss....Morning Star

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg

Reviewed on September 3, 2007

Your choice of the metaphor 'pear tree' - having its sweet gritty textured juicy fruit - is satisfying in light of the strong evidence of your unwavering faith in Jesus Christ woven deliciously throughout your thoughts.

'For me to live is Christ, but to die is gain' is, to me, the marvelous light that permeates this write. Well done!
Blessings ...
Richard

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on September 3, 2007

The poems were good, some very much so, but I have a bit of trouble with the posting of more than one at a time . . .

Reviewed by Art Hernandez

Reviewed on September 2, 2007

Very nice...each has a distinct flow of thought...very enjoyable work of poetic expression.....

very nice.....

Art Sun...