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first (using Haiku)
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i.
first thought, defensive
intriguing though it may be
second thought, really?

ii.
or, offensive lead
interesting state of facts
concepts and beliefs

iii.
to tarry within
spirals within the thunder
floating in the sky

iv.
to be different
has nothing to do with same
gist of meaningful



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 Reviews of "first (using Haiku)"
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on April 21, 2004
Very good Debby!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on April 20, 2004
Love the flow of thought!

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on April 20, 2004
well-developed haiku ...

Reviewed by A PAX
Reviewed on April 19, 2004
well done!

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on April 19, 2004
Always be different. Love 'em all...

Reviewed by Kevin Mc Crum (Reader)
Reviewed on April 19, 2004
Soaringly good! Much enjoyed.


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