stain dance wept men
lapping to rhythm of breeze
napping different trances
ward he the sky all sit in habit
rough a red evil of hope
ring on bye of love
rain by light is rite
in he moss of row
king you in drops close
sing all on sequence
ring it may
to recent old
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Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)
Reviewed on May 3, 2004
Debby,
This has so much of the ole’ classic flavor to it, that one is able to drift back in time where life was and enjoy the imagery, which you have gracefully presented in this timeless piece.
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This has so much of the ole’ classic flavor to it, that one is able to drift back in time where life was and enjoy the imagery, which you have gracefully presented in this timeless piece.
Best of luck,
Thomas
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