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connected - repost
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an oldie I'm resurfacing to experiment with this graphic code :) If it works you should see a butterfly that has a wave effect when you mouse over it. If not, well enjoy this poem anyway *grins*

 
connected

Written 6/3/2002

 i'm a grain of sand along
an ocean of life wondering
how i make a difference

and yet lifted by the
smallest of breeze
my grain of sand
lands on the water
creating a ripple that
travels for miles

and maybe you are sailing
at that very moment
the ripple floats by
and rocks your boat

depending upon your
state of mind you will
gently sway or be capsized

and sometimes i know
and often i don't
my very existence
has changed what you are

and as you are affected
by the moving water
it returns back to me
now carrying your power

but i am quick
and shapeshift fast
i am a mermaid
and i breathe underwater

with swish of tail
i glide the water
finding heaven
in oceans calmer

and there is a fisherman
patiently waiting yet
dangling a line and a lure

so i shift again
into a dove
with rush of wings
i take to air

and as each wing
strokes the air
it creates the breeze
that blows your hair

*everything is connected*


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 Reviews of "connected - repost"
Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on March 4, 2009
There is fine imagery and deep meaning in this poem, Debby; and the graphic image very effectively complements the whole offering. Thank you. Love and best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson
Reviewed on March 3, 2009
Your poetry is splendid and profound -- beautifully and effortlessly showing us our cause and effect relationships with nature and one another! Bravo, Debby! This exceptionally well expressed gem, goes into my library. Thank you!

Reviewed by Mary Patterson
Reviewed on March 3, 2009
We are all connected in the cosmos of time. I really liked the concept of the poem....M

Reviewed by Michael Guy
Reviewed on February 25, 2009
You have the "Butterfly Effect" in your poetry for sure. Waves of beautiful and reassuring ripples. A poem to take out on a gentle morning's kayak across the lake... I'll remember it

Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle
Reviewed on February 24, 2009
An absolutely gorgeous poem and picture.This is amazing work.I love it very much,take care

Edwin

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on February 22, 2009
Stunning write..thanks for sharing once more!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Carin Spirit
Reviewed on February 22, 2009
Beautiful and descriptive, the pic is beautiful but no movement

Reviewed by Art Hernandez
Reviewed on February 22, 2009
Nice work Debbie...from the grain of sand to the wind of wings, that connected flow of the Universe keeps us together.....

nice...

Art Sun...

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on February 22, 2009
Love it and love the graphic.
hugs
Fee

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on February 22, 2009
You are a mermaid that breaths underwater, connecting with abstracts and dreams and sounds not heard before. A kaleidoscope made with words that melt as we read until the last line make us connected with it.

Georg


Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on February 21, 2009
i do like this--but..sorry, no butterfly


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