an oldie I'm resurfacing to experiment with this graphic code :) If it works you should see a butterfly that has a wave effect when you mouse over it. If not, well enjoy this poem anyway *grins*
connected Written 6/3/2002
i'm a grain of sand along
an ocean of life wondering
how i make a difference
and yet lifted by the
smallest of breeze
my grain of sand
lands on the water
creating a ripple that
travels for miles
and maybe you are sailing
at that very moment
the ripple floats by
and rocks your boat
depending upon your
state of mind you will
gently sway or be capsized
and sometimes i know
and often i don't
my very existence
has changed what you are
and as you are affected
by the moving water
it returns back to me
now carrying your power
but i am quick
and shapeshift fast
i am a mermaid
and i breathe underwater
with swish of tail
i glide the water
finding heaven
in oceans calmer
and there is a fisherman
patiently waiting yet
dangling a line and a lure
so i shift again
into a dove
with rush of wings
i take to air
and as each wing
strokes the air
it creates the breeze
that blows your hair
There is fine imagery and deep meaning in this poem, Debby; and the graphic image very effectively complements the whole offering. Thank you. Love and best wishes,
Your poetry is splendid and profound -- beautifully and effortlessly showing us our cause and effect relationships with nature and one another! Bravo, Debby! This exceptionally well expressed gem, goes into my library. Thank you!
You have the "Butterfly Effect" in your poetry for sure. Waves of beautiful and reassuring ripples. A poem to take out on a gentle morning's kayak across the lake... I'll remember it
You are a mermaid that breaths underwater, connecting with abstracts and dreams and sounds not heard before. A kaleidoscope made with words that melt as we read until the last line make us connected with it.
The second book in the telepathy series. It contains more ways for the up and coming telepathist to experiment with the sending and receiving of thoughts and is at the end of the story about future telepathy people found unexpectedly chosen by the go
Regis
Edwin
Love Tinka
nice...
Art Sun...
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Georg