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trance and dance
by Debby Rosenberg → (All Poetry by Debby Rosenberg)
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music: Scott Huckabay, "State of Profusion"
*thoughts meet feelings* *the imagination creates reality* *simplified practical* *earth roots stability* *a primal urge* *the feet shuffle planted* *the arms grow* *legs stretch long* *a water sensation* *pleasures duality and desire* *hips sway sensation unleashes* *passion into a burning ignition* *fireflies belly flutter* *stomping into power* *air wings, move, groove* *rhythm expansion* *playful light embrace* *communication* *neck rolls side to front* *nod approval resonating* *expression murmur stars* *illumination vision radiance* *the face smiles glows* *portals of inner beauty* *the crown blossoms* *infinite awareness* *of patterns* *universal* *trance and dance*

Reviewed by Gwendolyn Thomas Gath

Reviewed on April 16, 2009

Enjoyed the refreshing imagery presented through
"trance and dance" befitting title as well

Reviewed by L. Figgins

Reviewed on April 14, 2009

What a dance! Pure joy!

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on April 12, 2009

You inspire, Debby. Thank you. Love and blessings,

Regis

Reviewed by D Johnson

Reviewed on April 9, 2009

Mystical and music of our soul are combined to take us through your dream.

Cheers,
Dan

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg

Reviewed on April 6, 2009

Cool font, sizzling image, nice snippet imagery. Kinda dreamlike!

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on April 4, 2009

inspired imagery and conceptually stimulating ...

Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson

Reviewed on April 3, 2009

Beautiful, delightful, upbeat and creative! You rock! Bravo!

Reviewed by 000 000 (Reader)

Your movement in words...capture the essence of the dance!

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Wow! I want to stay in this den all day!;-) Really I love the entire combo words, music, art, Debby! Thanks for the experience, love it!
gotta get that record;-)ET

Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle

This is an outstanding written piece,I enjoy it very much,take care

Edwin

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on April 2, 2009

Wow, what life you bring to this write with excitment, pizazz and a joy of life and living all so well expressed in the dance. This is one of your best...

Fee

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Marvelously uplifting, Debby!

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone

Your words transform me into a water Goddess! Thank you for such an enlightening poem!
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Quasi ethereal, a poem walking on water as fireflies go together to imitate a candle illuminating the portals of inner beauty.
Debby, sometimes your inspiration goes beyond!

Georg

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

wonderful, freedom, joy

Reviewed by Nicky Goodman

yaaaay! ...think i'll leave that guitar riff playing while i bob about getting ready for work - a trance dance would be preferable -super poem Debby :)