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fault line
by Debby Rosenberg → (All Poetry by Debby Rosenberg)
  
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i go to these rocks
and sit on a fault line
they radiate warmth
while i absorb sun

easily i nap
on my cradle nearby
and i'm swiftly escorted
to someother timeline

it is night in the woods
a celebration of sorts
homemade instruments
of strings and of flutes

everyone caught into
a light footed circle
dancing and hugging
swirling around

taking a moment
to catch my breath
a woman walks up
she is petite in frame
with long brown hair
and says "i am his wife"

i never heard what else
she said as the music
drowned her out
but i'll never forget
the look in her eyes
for they were very sad

about that time
i felt a chill
the sun was setting down
sitting in shadows
no longer warm
i awake to the sound of a crow

hike back down
the back of the fault line
being careful where i step
wondering now who that woman was
and why she sought me out



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 Reviews of "fault line"
Reviewed by michael horetsky (Reader)
Reviewed on January 17, 2003
Wow great write.. I want more.. Please..

Reviewed by Thelma Shutters (Reader)
Reviewed on January 17, 2003
Such a picture of your dream you gave to us, Great write Thelma

Reviewed by Tien Avielle (Reader)
Reviewed on January 17, 2003
this dream sent shivers of recognition through me!

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on January 17, 2003
I to found this haunting pic is excellent for the verse. loved it.
one of those that draw you in.
Peggy

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on January 17, 2003
the dreamscape certainly holds many surprises and mysteries...

Reviewed by Dens Dreamweaver (Reader)
Reviewed on January 17, 2003
a haunting write, leaving you with more questions than answers. Perhaps in time the reasons will be revealed.

Namaste'
Melanie

Reviewed by na na (Reader)
Reviewed on January 16, 2003
A really neat land you visitied Debby. I know you felt like staying there forever. Right? Bill Murray

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on January 16, 2003
A picture that makes me want to paint! and you paint your words as well as the photo! Good write.

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on January 16, 2003
haunting write...lovely expression...love the pic, my kind of place;-)


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