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A Cub Without a Den
by Mary E Lacey Desertrat → (All Poetry by Mary E Lacey Desertrat)
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Feeling left out

 

Here I lay outside the cave,
A cub without a den, 
Too small to be set free
But unwanted freedom
is the only thing I have.
 
I want to go inside the cave
But know that I cannot.
For bigger bears, lying there
Will only laugh and tease
 
All I want is a place to be
Accepted for myself and not
Ridiculed for my faults
I don’t know when that time will come.
But for now, I’m a cub without a den.
 
 
 
 

 


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 Reviews of "A Cub Without a Den"
Reviewed by David Maclellan
Reviewed on June 22, 2010
My thoughts about your poem are echoed in the the comments already posted. A really nice analogy, it would be a great verse to teach young children about the sadness of being outcast.
Best regards
David

Reviewed by Darkest Angel (Reader)
Reviewed on May 5, 2010
I feel the lump in my throat...I'm all choked up about it. This is a sad thing and so well written. It puts facts in the face that need to be addressed by all of us. I hate bullies, too...and carelessness. Nice piece to share, Mary, thanks.

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on June 18, 2008
Symbolically meaningful and universally applicable; I respect your thoughts, Mary. Thank you. Love and best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed by Cryssa C
Reviewed on May 30, 2008
I feel that way sometimes, too...
I enjoy your poetry.
Cryssa

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on May 19, 2008
Awww, the life of many children in this world as well. Born into families that do not want them, yet much too young to fend for themselves, well said...

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed on May 19, 2008
Mary,

This one is sad - we all feel that way - trust me, I do more often than not - just keep writing, I'll keep reading/reviewing, okay?

(((HUGS))) love and prayer, Karla.


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