The Spade Of Lies (poem) by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse

Reviewed on April 7, 2010

"Chide the body of burdens;
Release censures condemnations;
Anger�s blame breeds to impute;
over & over & over again
a thirsty hungry beast."

I opted to edit this line
I didn't realize it left
the Sequence of the poem....

Reviewed by Jon Willey

Reviewed on April 22, 2008

"Anger's blame breeds to impute". This is a way cool verse Vickie. Prevaricators are an insidious lot. My father always told me that the one and only thing we have of worth to offer our fellow human beings, is our credibility. Without it, all else is baseless. Your excellent poem supports that premise quite fully I believe. Thanks for sharing your great talent with us. Jon Michael Willey

Reviewed by Bernice Angoh

Reviewed on April 21, 2008

Oh, this will be scary!!!! a nightmare! an abomination....God help us that something like that never comes to pass...

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on April 21, 2008

Intense but then again if it was inspired or enduced from that nightmare I can see why. Very well done though Vick just the same...intense.
hugs
Fee

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on April 21, 2008

In the chaotic and uncertain state of the world in which we live, it is not surprising that such a condition could give rise to nightmares. Effectively expressed and shared experience, Vickie. Love and hugs,

Regis xo

Reviewed by Morning Star

Reviewed on April 21, 2008

Vickie this was not a dream it was a nightmare!
I have a few of this bizarre dream
Think of beautiful things when your falling asleep
But that dream turn into a fantastic write!!
Peace Love and Light....Hugessss...Morning Star

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone

Reviewed on April 21, 2008

Victoria, Some intense dreaming going on! You really should think much more romantic thoughts before going to sleep! This is very intense and very mind opening!
Much peace, love, and light
Amber "V"

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on April 21, 2008

Why that shovel make me think of a lot of bull...
In our human zoo, yes, it should be a sign telling everybody not to feed the politicians.

Georg

Reviewed by Flying Fox Ted L Glines (Reader)

Reviewed on April 21, 2008

Victoria, I do not find your dream so bizarre. Terrorists come in all shapes and sizes. Some of them smile a lot as they spin their webs of doom. Sort of reminds me of a non-biblical saying: "Vengeance is mine sayeth the survivors." You covered a lot of ground with this poem, and did a very excellent job.

Happier dreams to you!

Ted