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Obliquities Immurements
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The Word Day "Word" In My Email Is MAELSTROM from dictionary.com –noun 1. a large, powerful, or violent whirlpool. 2. a restless, disordered, or tumultuous state of affairs: the maelstrom of early morning traffic. 3. (initial capital letter) a famous hazardous whirlpool off the NW coast of Norway.
Photography Artist: http://screwed-up-reality.deviantart.com/ Obliquities Immurements Born in a turbulent emotional maelstrom of conflicting regimentations defiance there is a destructive disorder of convolution's vortex elevating a violent appendence Bred by a disruption of the diversities from the damaged heart of passion's avengeance there is also an incomparable hostility beyond the surface of undenied acceptance Birthed by the slain hallows of the unseen galley by a whisper conjectured into sprawled resonance there is freedom of obliquities immurement's spall for the liberations within unknowable resurgence. In Joy, In Peace, In Grace, In Harmony of Love poétesse d'amour ~ poétesse romantique Embraced ~ Embrassé © Victoria L. McColley

Reviewed by D. Vegas (Reader)

Reviewed on September 25, 2009

Vickie, I've been there a number of times. So many that I've lost count.
Always,
DeB

Reviewed by Samuel Stone

Reviewed on April 29, 2008

I love your poems, I could spent days just trying to discover the depth of meaning... I have always loved poetry that makes one ponder... well..done... I hope this posting finds you happy and well...
Sam

Reviewed by Morning Star

Not sure if you are conveying the many
emotional stages that a person goes through
with chemical imbalance of the brain
Because Immurements is a prison an
Exceptional large stated of confutation
Turbulence and strong feelings
even destruction
That is what a person goes through with depression
Or with a chemical imbalance of the brain!
This is what your poem reminded me of
I may be wrong!
Peace Love and Light....and Hugessss...Morning Star

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Obliquities immurements is going to twist my brother Jersey Ed brain, you shouldn't use so many syllables words! and that damage heart of passion will provoke a poem from him.

Georg

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo

Reviewed on April 28, 2008

Filled with all the wonderment of life, spoken through a heart of beauty, well expressed....

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Jon Willey

Sure, that's easy for you to say.

Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)

Most impressive Vickie, blessings holly

Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU

A poetic grand... "Obliquities Immurements" glows.

In admiration,

Andre Emmanuel Bendvai ben-YEHU

Reviewed by Bernice Angoh

Born...Bred...Birthed...this one is a keeper!

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Wow wild stuff here Vick, not sure I grasp all of the words or lines but it certainly is passionate, intense and dramatic. Now I need to find my dictionary though for you did lose me with a lot of your more exotic words and I hate to miss any of nuances you are offering.

hugs
Fee

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone

Vickie, dearheart, this is very intense. I agree with Reg, I must read it again and again.
Tender is the night, that fills your passionate heart, love that heart of yours, it is a very wonderful heart!
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"

Ps, please read my collaboration with William Bonilla, What Was, Is Now

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Oh sweet Vickie. There's no way I can comment on this in a meaningful manner. That said. That says a lot. I need to read this again and again. Loads of love to you, I am your friend;

Regis xoxo bzzzt...