Severed Emotions (poem) by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on May 31, 2008

Written on silken laces of love
Yer yin and yang of loves emmotions touches me heart !
The Cap'n s heart can only take so much lassie !
Fly to me dove ?
{single teardrop}
Huggs fer yer heart
And huggs fer yer emmotions !
Or maybe jus huggs? LOL
.....Seriously quite touching love!

Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G

Reviewed on May 25, 2008

An intense longing is felt and expressed deeply!
New adventures do surface!
Love the deviant picture too!
Love this the romantic depth in this Vic!
To be empowered through it all!
Write On!
Warmeset Blessings and Inner Peace, Warrior Purple Passion Shexooo

STay Positive and STay STrong!

Reviewed by Jon Willey

Reviewed on May 25, 2008

Alone and neglected. My heart is still wondering, where this love went. Only you said it with such beauty and passion. You have so ably captured a broken heart. JMW

Reviewed by Michael Guy

Reviewed on May 25, 2008

Not a wasted, stray word! Every line pierces the Heart in the same straight path as that arrow did your soul... And the it builds to the potent couplings of the 4 last lines: ...heart's virtue/...devote trust/...undying love/...stranded hope!!!! what masterful use of language (surprised you didn't call it "Undying Love" or "Stranded Hope"...Later great poetess

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on May 25, 2008

Completely compelling and captivating; a powerfully emotive and meaningful write Vickie. Love and hugs and my very best wishes to you,

Regis xo

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on May 24, 2008

Who has not suffered heartbreak? Those who have not are a few that they are clueless. Writing about heartbreak can help if we get beyond it and move into our new life. The sooner we do this, the quicker the heartbreak will disappear.

Ron

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo

Reviewed on May 21, 2008

A piece of such longing, of wishing things to be different from the outcome, a very heartwrenching piece....

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Bernice Angoh

Reviewed on May 21, 2008

Very deep and sad write...

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone

Reviewed on May 21, 2008

Vickie,
This is absolutely an awe inspiring poem. You heart is poured right into it. I embrace your power of the pen!
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed by JASMIN HORST SEILER

Reviewed on May 21, 2008

Not your pen, but your heart printed these words. Jasmin Horst

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on May 21, 2008

Words can be written, words can be heard, words can be thought, but there are words that only can be felt by the heart.
Excellent.

Georg

Reviewed by Morning Star

Reviewed on May 21, 2008

Vickie this is beautifully conveyed emotions!!

deception a very painful and powerful!

And very sad!!

A very powerful write!!!

Peace Love and Light...and Hugessss too....Morning Star

Vickie I wrote a poem similar to this one

If you have time read its Stars began to Tear

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on May 21, 2008

Vickie,

This is GORGEOUSLY penned and illustrated - felt the sadness lingering in yearning lines - well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Linda Noble (Reader)

Reviewed on May 21, 2008

Vickie, How eloquently you gave voice to my heart. Your talents exceed your ability to write. Thank you so much for this beautiful verse. Linda