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Breathing As One
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Breathing As One



Your skin glows

like a fire fly luminating the nectarine blossoms

of spring’s sensational delight.

Scents of softness escape

into the gentle breeze

as the delicate orchid opens

 into the purest of promises

kissed by the purity of hope.

Your angelic voice sings

 to the clouds of divinity

like a song bird whispering

for my heart to follow

the calling of your name.

The dusk of evening floats

like a lost feather;

cascading the bounty of comforts

as I carry memories into the twilight

of moon beams caress.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

of the magnificent sapphires,

 

and mystical serenity of love

to become one with you…

welcoming the night of the universe.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I am filled with devotion

 

that I may now dry all tears of sorrow;

for in the quiet of timelessness…

Our star was secretly drenched with a celestial kiss,

leaving me within this beauty

to listen for the last heartbeat of this day…

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

into the echoes of our closure’s embrace…

 

Into…the pearls of moonlight

I stand in peacefulness within the open nimbus

like the snow cap mountains

so that we may breath as one,

kindred to our unity as chest to chest,

heart to heart,

soul to soul,

 

breathing as one within the grace of love forevermore…

 

 

 

(Written: May 20th, 2008 6:15 a/m)

 

In Joy, In Peace, In Grace, In Harmony of Love

Embraced ~ Embrassé

poétesse d'amour ~ poétesse romantique

Copyright© 2008 Vickie L. McColley

 

 

 

 

 

 

I am blessed to know it’s your heart that I hear beating

 

Holding our memories treasure… next to my heart,

 

I rest my heart within eternity’s search

 


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 Reviews of "Breathing As One"
Reviewed by dan Rosenhagen
Reviewed on October 6, 2009
Heart to heart
soul to soul
face to face

'Twas written in my own hand
in"Sand and Soul", now I see it here.
They say that great minds think alike,
but in this case it is "Old Souls"
sharing their insight. :)



Reviewed on December 1, 2008
Hello Vickie,

Loved this immensely, especially -

"cascading the bounty of comforts

as I carry memories into the twilight"

Brilliant!!


Hugs,

Lance

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on August 20, 2008
Thank you for sharing this gift, Vickie. Love you lots,

Regis

Reviewed by Richard Orey
Reviewed on June 17, 2008
"As the delicate orchid opens into the purest of promises... breathing as one within the grace of love..."

Dreaming of such soulful and sensual beauty, I lose myself in the ecstasy of my young lover's sweet embrace.

"Richard! Wake up! Vickie wants to know what you think about 'Breathing As One.'"

"Later, please! I'm busy right now. I mean, really busy!"

Yeah, I don't ever wanna wake up from this.

Fabulous work, Vickie.

Richard

Reviewed by Katie Gabrielle
Reviewed on June 12, 2008
stunning visual poetry makes the reader experience your heart and soul and joy through this beautiful, free spirited poetry! Keep being you and never afraid to feel and touch and live

Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle
Reviewed on June 8, 2008
I love the way that you play with words and create such fantastic,vivid imagery.This poem is absolutely amazing.

Edwin

Reviewed by Bernice Angoh
Reviewed on June 6, 2008
This took my breath away! Incredible and absolutely beautiful piece and that picture, ah!

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on June 5, 2008
Don't breath until you are up there, among the stars and take a deep one, inhaling the universe's fragrance where all is new, or old, growing or dying, but that its worth to have touched our heat.
What about a kiss like a passing comet promising to come back?

Georg

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on June 5, 2008
This is beautiful Vicky I had to read it the second time as my breathing slowed down some. Love dwells in every word. Thank you for sharing.

Newfie hugs, Rose

Reviewed by H Cruz
Reviewed on June 4, 2008
Fine poem! ;)

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater
Reviewed on June 4, 2008
Passion just flows so natural in this piece...I don't mind promoting this author at all...this poetry will never go out of style..never abandon this genre, V...it would be like telling Mozart to switch to jazz...be well you...

Love,
Sage

Reviewed by Morning Star
Reviewed on June 4, 2008
Awesome love this poem
your words captured the beauty of love
and becoming one soul
one breath
one beating heart
Brilliant and romantic!!
Peace Love and light...and hugessss too...Morning star

Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on June 4, 2008
This will leave you breathless for sure. Great poem God bless. JMW

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on June 4, 2008
Vickie,
This is such an amazing poem..I am so touched by it. I especially cannot tell you how much these lines make my heart flutter:

"Our star was secretly drenched with a celestial kiss,
leaving me within this beauty
to listen for the last heartbeat of this day…
I am blessed to know it’s your heart that I hear beating
into the echoes of our closure’s embrace…"

You are simply Romantically inclined!!!
Much peace, love, and light to you,
Amber "Vivianna"

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on June 4, 2008
A truly amazing piece with expressions of love that far surpass the emotional realities.....

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on June 4, 2008
Catching my breath on this one for to breathe as one with you would be a paradise of sweet passion. You write your heart and desire out in your poetry and the man who is the recipiant of this should know how much he is blessed...

hugs
Fee

Reviewed by Gene Williamson
Reviewed on June 4, 2008
Breathing as One, Victoria, leaves us...breathless. - Gene.

Reviewed by William DeVault
Reviewed on June 4, 2008
Very nice. Beautiful flow and aspect. Stirring.


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