Deceptions Passage (poem) by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by J AG

Reviewed on July 11, 2008

This is a lovely piece of work. The flow is hypnotic, a release into an aqua abyss where we freefall at the mercy of the reality of our existence. Beautiful writing!

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on July 11, 2008

After writing that poem, the author ties it up with a genial ribbon, "wishing to sink to the very bottom of regret"
The one inspiring this one should read this poem thrice.

Georg

Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle

Reviewed on July 10, 2008

Hi Victoria,you are like a painter because you use powerful words and images as your brush to create amazing poetry.It is always a pleasure reading your works.Everytime that I read your poetry,my heart feel so so good and you make the reader become addicted to your poems.You are an amazing writer.The Author's Den is lucky to have someone like you that can write poetry the way that you do and every reader that reads your poems is lucky to experience your words and talent.take care of yourself.I'm looking forward to reading your next poem.

Edwin

Reviewed by Morning Star

Reviewed on July 9, 2008

Wooow a powerful penn
Very deep and dark with much sadness
I hope this is only a poetic verse hope that you are
OK this write and picture
Is a fantastic piece as always
Your talent shines!!
Peace Love and Light....Morning star

Reviewed by Jon Willey

Reviewed on July 9, 2008

It is my sincere wish that this poem is strictly a creative exercise and not any form of reality for you. It is of course, another superbly written poem from your pen. May you walk the long path of peaceful experiences. JMW

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on July 9, 2008

Dark and deeply moving, Vickie. I hope you are doing well. Love and best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo

Reviewed on July 9, 2008

How deeply we feel when another scorns us beyong belief. Expressions coming from a very dark place, now the climb out to walk once again in the light....

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Debra Baker

Reviewed on July 9, 2008

Victoria, I crown you with perfecting this poem in perils of regret. You are an amazing Writer, who captures the image of a poem, delivering it to your readers perfecto...

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on July 9, 2008

I love this seemingly deceptive feeling poem, that a ladie's soul has been so badly bruised as to find no hope as she sinks into the quagmire of despair.
Fee

Reviewed by Rose Rideout

Reviewed on July 9, 2008

I probably took more out of the end of your write Vicky. I wish to sink to the very bottom of regret. The majority of us have regrets but life has to go on and we can change that by learning from it, I have and I swear I will not leave this world with regrets if at all possible. Take care and thank you for sharing.

Newfie Hugs, Rose

Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G

Reviewed on July 8, 2008

WOW! This is TOTALLY EXCELLENT Vic!
I love the falling effect in your expressions!

So explicit!Are YOU Ok... PLease tell me, if you want to talk!
Did something or someone stir you up....
You got inspired by something strong, this is wild and perfectly dark and furlong!
I really love this!
The photo is PERFECT!
I am saving this!
WRITE ON!
and call me, you have my number right - If you ever just need to chat -
I hope it's not me that brought this atrocity flowing!
I don't think I could, my writing just keeps going...
STay Positive!
I care!
Loves and Embraced Hugs, Warrior Purple Passion Lady Sheexooo (Sink tot the bottom of regret) That's intense! This poem is right On!

Reviewed by Jill curry (Reader)

Reviewed on July 8, 2008

brava, beautiful and exquisite, hugs, for your poetry speaks volumes

Reviewed by Theresa Koch

Reviewed on July 8, 2008

I love the photo-art and the poetry~wonderful

Reviewed by Gene Williamson

Reviewed on July 8, 2008

Victoria, there's a poem in almost every line. Beautifully
written (and worded) in your own unique way. But I have to
wonder if this is merely a writing exercise or that you definitely
are the heroine (or victim) of the poem. If the latter, how can
we cheer you up? I can paint my loveable nose red and act the clown, maybe jump through a flaming hoop. -gene.
a flaming hoop